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- Interview with Rewrite the Stars Founder & Editor-in-Chief, Smrithi Senthilnathan
By Carina Featured in this interview we have Smrithi Senthilnathan, Founder and Editor-in-Chief of Rewrite the Stars Review. She will be telling us about the magazine, her other projects, and giving some useful advice. You can also find Smrithi on her Instagram, @theunwrittenstories101. Carina: To begin, why don’t you introduce yourself? Smrithi: Hi! I'm Smrithi, the Founder & Editor-in-Chief of Rewrite the Stars Review. I recently finished high school and will be going to college this fall to study journalism and data science :). Interesting! So, why did you start Rewrite the Stars Review? I've always loved writing since I was a child. I was going through some old trinkets the other day and I found my 5-year-old journal where my dream ambitions were to be an author and rockstar haha. Over the years, writing remained more of a hobby that would mostly surface during school competitions and the occasional short story but nothing more than that. During the pandemic though, I had a lot more free time on my computer and I got back into writing. The first year of the pandemic, I spent a lot of time on my own projects and wrote my first novel. The second year, I started exploring a lot of online writing communities! I created my own writing account on Instagram and interacted with a lot of people there. Through these communities, I discovered the concepts of literary magazines and publications. I submitted to a couple of them and had my fair share of acceptances and rejections. One thing I noticed though was that a lot of the pieces published in these magazines seemed to be very deep and cryptic and involved a lot of figurative language. Although they were nice to read, they also felt daunting to me as an amateur author because almost everything I wrote was pretty direct and straightforward. It heightened my impostor syndrome and fears that I’ll never be as good as the greats. I started Rewrite The Stars Review primarily for authors like me. For amateur authors who are just figuring out how to use language at their disposal. Through this magazine, I try to emphasize the different shapes and sizes writing comes in. After all, art isn't about the words but the emotion and what it makes you feel :). That’s amazing! Did anyone or anything in specific inspire aspects of Rewrite the Stars Review? That's a great question! Honestly, since it was a while ago, I can't remember any specific things I was inspired by but I definitely drew inspiration from a lot of magazines on Instagram for the layouts of posts and issues and the website. I do remember though that at the time, my favorite small magazines were Healthline Zine, Cloudscent Journal, and Ice Lolly Review. Those are definitely some other amazing magazines with many achievements. Do you have any big plans for the future of Rewrite the Stars? I definitely do want to start thinking about physical copies of issues and charity work! One big motto of RTS is that we believe anyone can be an artist and you don't need a degree or professional courses to be able to create art. Although our contributors are primarily young authors, we do have a few older authors who are discovering the beauty of writing later in life and try their hand at it! So it's very important to me that eventually RTS contributes to improving access to education and literacy for underprivileged children. I haven't thought about it much until now since RTS was just starting out, but I do have ideas in mind that I want to work on now, especially since I'm an adult. Those are amazing ideas, I can’t wait to see them implemented! Could you tell us what it’s like to be the founder and Editor in Chief of a magazine? What are some of your responsibilities and favorite things to do? Of course! So honestly my duties aren't set in stone and they've changed a lot over the two years that I've been running RTS. At the very beginning, I was handling almost all the departments including graphic designing and social media. After more members have joined the team, I'm grateful to have been able to lighten my duties by spreading responsibilities among different people. Currently the main thing I do is curate the issue. That involves reading through all the submissions and providing feedback, discussing with other editors on which pieces we want to publish, emailing submitters, and publishing the issue (for more information on how our submission process works, you can check our article about the behind the scenes of RTS). I also unofficially do a lot of things though. I delegate duties to others and make sure everybody's doing their job. I provide my feedback and suggestions on designs and blog articles. I help coordinate events and suggest ideas on what kind of events to hold. In case somebody is unavailable for a particular week, I help pitch in to ensure their work gets done. I review new staff applications and help to train staff members. I lay out plans for RTS and set goals for the team. There's a scene from the show Brooklyn 99 that I adore where one character says to another that being a leader isn't about having lofty targets and meeting all of them, but rather it's about putting out fires. A lot of the things I do for RTS may just be simple things that just involve a couple of messages, but I'd like to think that simply the fact that I'm there when the team needs me provides a feeling of comfort in the knowledge that someone else is taking care of things and making sure they're done properly! As for my favorite things to do, well that's a difficult question because I love almost every aspect of running this magazine haha! If I had to pick, I'd say my favorite thing is a tie between reading all the lovely work sent to us, and responding to emails from contributors! I especially love when someone tells us that RTS is their first publication, or they squeal with love for our magazine in an email. It makes me smile every time to see that RTS actually has a positive impact on people. Your hard work, even if it just seems like small things, is definitely noticed! I saw you mentioned a novel earlier. So, can you give us more information about some of your other projects? Aw thank you, that means a lot to me. So I'll be completely honest, I haven't had a lot of time to work on my writing in the past year because I was in 12th grade and had to balance my schoolwork with college applications and chose to use my extra time for my writing account and RTS (because when I actually wrote my novel I wanted to be devoted to it). Now though, I'm on summer break and hope to actually draft my idea! I don't have much to give you right now but the book itself is a Hunger Games-esque novel where royalty choose representatives to fight for them in a life-or-death tournament to decide the next monarch of the country! It's set in a world with a magic system inspired by Indian culture, and I'm very excited to get started on it soon! That sounds cool, I’ll have to check it out once it’s finished! Do you have any advice for balancing projects, school, and a personal life? The main thing that has helped me is to make schedules and lists. I have daily to-do lists, weekly check-ins, and monthly goals. It's a lot more convenient to track what you need to do and how when it's outlined in front of you, instead of just trying to do it inside your head. Reading Atomic Habits by James Clear gave me a new perspective on productivity and I have since implemented a lot of the techniques in that. I would definitely recommend reading the book - or at the very least subscribing to his weekly newsletter! I think it's also important to know your priorities and when to prioritize what. I took breaks from RTS during my most important exams and although I was still available to text, I made sure I didn't have any major duties per say and delegated all my work (shoutout to my beautiful wonderful team for supporting me throughout all of it and motivating me, I love you guys <3). I also made sure that I prioritized my social life and didn't stay cooped up in my house all the time. I'm not a very social person but I went out with my friends once a month! I think it's all about just good planning and being able to go with the flow. Plans do break sometimes, especially when your mother announces a random family member's wedding that we need to attend, but as long as you try to get as much done when you can and don't fret too much about incomplete to-do lists, you'll be fine :). Thank you for that! Finally, is there any other advice you have for other young and ambitious people? 1) Be bold and unafraid to explore. Try different genres and styles and art forms. Never limit your creativity. Don't be afraid to take risks. My favorite thing about art is that there's no set definition for it so there is literally no limit to the things you could do - you could even create your own artform! 2) Never tie yourself down to arbitrary standards. Don't do things for other people or because others are doing them. Your art is valid and nobody can take that away from you. It doesn't matter if you write poetry or fanfiction, it doesn't matter if you write everyday or once a year, it doesn't matter if you've published eleven books or you never want to publish. You are a writer, you are an artist, and you're valid. 3) Make art a priority. It can be so easy to say "Oh I wish I could write but I never have time!" but I personally believe that you can always make time for things that you want. Obviously you should never force yourself to write, but if you truly do want to write then try to make time for that. One of my favorite quotes is "the price of discipline is always less than the pain of regret". Easier to wake up earlier or stop procrastinating rather than regret it later. Note: In some parts of this interview Smrithi talks about writing in general instead of art, because she herself is a writer. But, Rewrite the Stars Review still publishes and appreciates art!
- The Psychology Behind Our Emotional Connection to Fictional Characters
By Milica Filipovic The reading community online and in person thrives off readers’ connections to the imaginary characters we follow through books. As a young writer, I’ve had to notice how to market my characters towards audiences in ways that’ll build long lasting bonds with readers. There are two aspects that come into play here: Why do we need these attachments and how can we ensure they are made? To start, we must understand how these attachments are formed. This emotional relationship is directly related to psychology. As my professor would gladly quote, psychology is the basis of human interaction. When we accompany a character through the ups and downs of their lives, our brains develop an empathetic connection. You are feeling and understanding the character’s emotions and their actions in response to them. This feeling can be altered by writers to evoke specific types of relationships with their reader. This is where your part comes in as the creator of your own story and its meaning. You have certain characters you want readers to resonate with and in order to do so, you must use psychology as a tool. Let the way our minds work be your critic. Attempt to observe your work from the perspective of an outsider, if you cannot sympathize with your characters then neither will your readers. Avoiding this issue is easy. Simply make your characters normal. This doesn’t mean taking away all their unusual aspects or abilities but simply making sure that these unique traits aren’t their only ones. Give them normal mannerisms, gestures, or quirks. Maybe they interrupt others in conversation, or perhaps they get so lost in their thoughts that they dissociate during events. Furthermore, don’t be afraid to make them imperfect. A flawless character often falls under the archetype of a Mary Sue, a character talented at everything with no shortcomings. No one wants to read about a person who’s got everything going for them, give your readers the dark and grim details. Characters are impacted by their pasts, this should be resembled in the way they are perceived. Even if they seem perfect, it is likely they’ve got something else. For all we know, Mary Sue could’ve been extremely arrogant because she had everything going on. Maybe she was an egotist. Explore that side of your characters and let it be known to your readers. The bond between readers and characters is rooted deeply in our psychology, driven by empathy and human interaction. As a writer, leveraging this knowledge is crucial to crafting characters that resonate and endure in the minds of your audience. Don’t let fear be a barrier for your creative mind. It's the nuances and flaws that make characters memorable and their journeys impactful.
- Art and Literature : How Art Improves Writing
by Prisha Mehta The object of art is not to reproduce reality, but to create a reality of the same intensity. - Alberto Giacometti Oftentimes literature does the same to us, we get lost in the alternate reality of the novel, letting imagination and reality collide. Literature and art have always been hand in hand, each a personification of the other, authors have often drawn inspiration from artworks. Examples of artworks being incorporated with literature are novels such as The Da Vinci Code, Black Water Lilies, and The Goldfinch. Let us take a closer look inside Dan Brown's The Da Vinci Code which uses Leonardo da Vinci’s masterpieces such as the enigmatic smile of the Mona Lisa which acts as a clue for the protagonist in unravelling the mystery as well as using the cryptic imagery in The Last Supper. These paintings acted as the backstory for the novel, using these artworks to uncover the ancient secrets and challenge the conventional interpretations of history and religion. Similarly, Micheal Bussi’s book Black Water Lilies, portrays Claude Monet’s famous painting "Water Lilies”. He takes us deeper into the psyche of the painter while setting the novel in his hometown “Giverny”. The author uses the painting as a metaphor, like the flowers floating on the surface of the pond. This metaphor can be interpreted in many ways such as how we only see people at their surface level just like the flowers never bothering to see their inner being or their roots, so to speak. Another perspective could be how like flowers we are ephemeral, a fleeting life in this system, one day we bloom the next we wither. The paintings serve as a bridge between the past and present, as secrets unravel, everything leads back to Monet’s masterpieces. The same way, one can use artworks to depict various types of symbolism in their novels. Here’s how you can do the same: Choosing the Right Artwork Selecting the correct artwork is crucial to effectively convey symbolism in writing. Consider the themes, mood, and tone of your story, and choose artwork that aligns with these elements. Look for pieces that evoke emotions or concepts relevant to your story, more specifically its plot. Whether it's a painting, sculpture, photograph, or any other form of visual art, the chosen artwork should resonate and connect with the story. 2. Interpreting Symbolism Once you've chosen your artwork, dive into its symbolic significance. Explore its cultural, historical, and artistic context to understand its hidden nuances. Consider how the artwork has been interpreted by scholars, critics, and artists throughout history. By understanding the symbolism behind the artwork, you can effectively integrate it into your writing and imbibe your story with multiple interpretations. E.g. The book Girl with a Pearl Earring by Tracy Chevalier explains the historical past of painter Johannes Vermeer’s painting of the same name by imagining the life of Griet, a servant in Vermeer’s household and capturing the social and cultural aspects of the Dutch Golden Age. This shows us perspectives we might have never thought of before. 3. Using Artwork as Plot Devices Artwork can serve as more than just decorative elements; it can also drive the plot forward and help develop characters. Using the artwork as a symbol for change, revelation, or conflict within the story helps us to understand the characters and their relationships with the artwork and how they evolve over time, reflecting their growth, struggles, and inner turmoil. By using such artworks in the key plot points, one can create a story that truly resonates with the readers. To enhance the writing to properly adapt the artwork into the plot of the story, one can use writing techniques such as, Descriptive Imagery This would be one of the most important and integral ways to adapt the artwork into the story. Through using sensory details to engage the reader's imagination, it can evoke a powerful visual experience. This essentially creates a vivid and immersive description of the artwork within the story. 2. Character Interactions with Art A painting can be used to show different perspectives to different people. Each character can have a different emotional attachment to the artwork. This shows how the characters interact with the artwork, revealing their personalities, emotions, and beliefs through their responses to the artwork. Thus, using artworks as symbols in writing is a way to make stories more interesting as well as meaningful. Writers can pick such artworks after understanding its history and hidden emotions to correctly utilise it in their piece. This helps the readers form an attachment to the artwork through literature. Utilising various writing techniques will enhance the reader’s senses to read a story they surely will not forget. Using writing techniques such as these will not only make the novel much more enthralling, but also allows the author to experiment with various writing techniques. Follow the author Prisha on Instagram @prishaaa_m
- NaPoWriMo Feature
April is National Poetry Writing Month! To celebrate that, we asked our followers on social media to send us poems they'd written in the past month. These artists went above and beyond with their poetry, exploring themes from asexuality to feminism. Continue reading for a selection of poetry from poets around the globe, coupled with comments by our editor, Bri. If you like what you read, you can check out these artists' social media handles to read more of their work! As always, thank you for your continuous support, we wouldn't be where we are without it <3 Friends by Sammy Always keep them close, Some will stay, Some will go, You never know who might end up being your friend, But always know they'll be there till the end, Because they are your friends. Bio - Sammy is a 12 year old girl from India who has been very interested in poetry and writing since last year. In February 2023, she started her mixedgram (an account on which she shares different things, not only writing but art, cooking etc.) Instagram - @the_words_you_missed. Comments - I love the vague yet intriguing first line that really draws in the reader; who is them, and why should we keep them close? The immediate follow-up of the answer maintains the rhythm and the elaboration feels so natural. The final two lines that wrap it up nicely are very comforting! Poppies by Claire Kroening Their eyes speak in poppies: spring rain, sunset-valleys, sound calmness where it's enough to just be; blossoms of Venus starbright ever unfolding, ever growing, ever loving - for everything else becomes clear like the grass peaks through the sundrenched-warmth for now is enough in their icy-blue. Used napowrimo prompt - Eyes Bio - Claire Kroening is a queer poet based in Wisconsin. Their work has been published in Honeyfire Lit, Intersections Magazine, Maythorn Magazine, and The Globe Review, among others. In their free time they appreciate visiting art museums and studying creative writing. More of their work can be found on Instagram. Instagram - @clairerosek Comments - The first line is fresh, original and eye-catching! The vivid descriptions flow extremely well together as you gradually shift to motions (ever unfolding, ever growing, ever loving) and end nicely with a final subject looping back to the theme of “eyes” and a transformation. The Watchman and His Cat by Shamik Banerjee I know a watchman and his cat; He, with it, every night and day, Sits and guards a landowner's flat, And does not very often say; When I his small guardroom pass by, A nice rictus by him is shown, But never much can converse I, Though full five years he has me known; His family, did long demise, Are dead too, the cat's kitlings three, Perhaps, they find in each other's eyes, Mitigation from agony; Blessed is their bond, but more than that, A loveness no one cognize can, Save the watchman who loves his cat, And the cat who loves his watchman. Bio - Shamik Banerjee is a poet and poetry reviewer from the North-Eastern belt of India. He loves taking long strolls and spending time with his family. His deep affection with Solitude and Poetry provides him happiness. Instagram - @where_tales_end Comments - The first line is great at drawing in the reader. I love how you continue on to describe their routine, providing familiarity between the reader and cast. I loved the relationship of each character with the persona and how they seem at first to mean nothing until you explain the history and we come to like the new characters, understand their story. The ending is sweet and perfect for the overall piece. The First by Ines Mueller I try to think of good times between you and me, but the memory keeps running away. Dress billowing in the wind, laughing over her shoulder, looking at me with an “I know something you don’t know” kind of childish glee. She’s not wrong but she is dead. And as I watch you read her eulogy, the paper steady in your hands, your crisp black suit melts into yellow and orange and red with vibrant pink flowers blooming on green grass, stained glass, the organs’ melancholia. I shouldn’t be here, I think, but she keeps running and running and running until she is gone, over the horizon. Bio - Ines likes to read and write, taking inspiration from her life and her chaotic brain. She lives in California. Instagram - @ines.m.m. Comments - The jarring comparison of the present and then dive into the joyful memory is great, especially when you reveal the surprise that she’s dead. I love the imagery you create in the funeral scene and the line “the organs’ melancholia”. I like how in the end we realise that the persona is leading up to regret and missing this person. A Bit Of Advice by Zia Adora Shining brightly in the sky up above, Shimmering, sparkling and glowing. Like a mirror ball made out of ivory, Lighting up the vivid night sky. Being a companion of the stars and Inspiration for poets to write about. The moon always stole people's hearts. But a bit of advice, The moon also has a darker side, Murky, gloomy, obscure. Dark and rough like it's made from obsidian. Disguising itself as the vivid space it's floating in. Always forgotten and left out, Wondering if someone, somewhere wrote a poem about its darkness too. Pondering if people realize it's the same moon who they admire for it's beauty, But never search for its presence when its showing its true self. When it's finally showing its darkside. Bio - Zia is just an insomanic poet who turns her sadness and anger into poems and could be found hunched over her phone reading whatever book she currently found interesting with a cup of tea and her earphones at 3am in the morning. Instagram - @sleepdeprived_writer Comments - I love the overall flow. Fantastic imagery especially “like a mirror ball made out of ivory” really stood out to me. I love how you compared light and dark and gave the moon personality, linking it’s existence to something more, something deeper, like the side of a person not many people know: the “darkside” as you say. A Teaspoon of Sand by Kiran A slam of a door Being brushed off as a joke It all starts so innocent ‘A favor?’ they ask Already stabbing my back It wasn’t like this before Before it was bright It was love and it was light Now it’s dark Its words and claims of my worthlessness Clanging in my ear I can hear them, feel them, see them Through my eyes, though Covered in a velvet cloth All I do is sit and wonder With a glass of water in my hand, Would I dissolve into myself If I was a teaspoon of sugar Or would I remain Like a teaspoon of sand? Bio - Kiran is a young writer and poet from India. Usually found daydreaming and writing in the back of her maths notebook, she aspires to be a published author someday. She hopes that her poetry resonates with the reader and moves them, even if it is a minute shift. Instagram - @kiran.writess Comments - Overall, a sorrowful piece with a fantastic first line with drama, leaving readers curious! I also love the comparison of past and present and the light and dark symbolism. The description of the impact of the words are intense and you end with a new found question that readers themselves may reflect on as well. An Average Day by Nethi tw; some imagery of blood how did it feel when you kissed her in your bedroom last night?/ did her lips taste of too-sour lemonade or was it sweet enough for your liking? / i promise i'm not hurting but the acid in my heart keeps on burning/ i wish you'd stabbed me in the heart/ instead of shoving me down the nearest well/ rendered me unfeeling instead of cursing me blind/ at least then i'd know what's good for me and avoid all that screams beautiful disaster/ sometimes i sit in my bathroom crying/ wondering how wounds so deep haven't killed me from the inside yet/ what was love but a poisonous lie/ disguised in wrapping paper and a handful of ribbons/ guess what?// i broke the 'stranger danger' rule/ jumped off the edge of the swimming pool double time/ and now i'm sinking into a swamp that once promised me so much/ so much for happiness// my blue heart is wide open, like a wound and i'm bleeding the red onto my pillows/ all while you kiss her in your childhood bedroom. Bio - Nethini is a Sri Lankan queer teen with a heartfelt passion for writing poetry. She also has a deep love for music and dreams of being able to play 'cardigan' by Taylor Swift on the guitar one day. Instagram - @venus.in.verse Comments - The jealousy conveyed in this is powerful and the suffering is also done well. I enjoyed how jealousy is conveyed through the descriptions of the persona’s reactions and how it effected them; the diversity of these demonstrates your creativity and I love how you ended the piece with a personal note: “and now I’m . . . “ which lends a personal melancholy finale. Skin by Pratiksha Flash floods of sun-soaked memories, Whirl into my mind, But I can still see undertones of shadows, plain as day Lurking. Skulking. Prowling like animals. Waiting to take over. Shadows of insecurity, of jealousy Shadows of longing For the people I yearn to be. Shadows that sweep me into rivers of fantasy, Only to crash me into ravines as the morning comes. How long will I have to beg, borrow and steal, The very essence of people, Who've committed no crime, Except the mere one, Of confidence, of genuinity? I seem to become one with my fears, I lurk, skulk and prowl, In the dark corners of a room. Waiting, watching, For a chance to transform into another. How many skins do we have to try on till one finally fits? Bio - Pratiksha is an aspirational young writer who can usually be found reading fantasy novels in the corner of her room. As an avid reader and writer, Pratiksha hopes that her work resonates with people and allows them to gain a fresh perspective of the world by looking at it through different lenses. Comments - The visuals in this are intense and vivid. The universal themes are also extremely relatable and beautifully described and the circle back to the movements of the ‘animals’ make for a fitting, satisfying conclusion. A Love Letter To The Moon by Nyx How do I make my whole life a love letter to the moon? The stars came to life They say by being yourselves, being happy, by loving yourself for who you are, by being easy on yourself, by living. I asked, “what do you mean?” They say that living is the rarest thing, most people just exist. They continued by admiring its beauty every night. Sometimes you can click on pretty pictures of it. I said that I do all this generally as well. They responded, “You see, your life is already a love letter to the moon. You just have to treat yourself better.” Bio - Nyx is a student and loves writing, singing and listening to music. Instagram - @_she_.writess Comments - The message in this poem is profound. The flow of the poem is beautiful as it describes the meaning of life and what it means to live and I love how you chose to explore that with both actions and the dialogue. Love that you end of a sweet note of self love April Is The Cruellest Month by R S (Inspired by T.S. Eliot's "The Waste Land") April is the cruellest month, Harbinger of hope, summer's prelude; Springing daisies, springing lilacs, At best a fleeting interlude. For hope ignites a sweltering fire, And turns to ash sweet content; April begets whim and desire, In hearts wallowing in lament. It saddles yearning to the heart, When fleeting is its innate nature; April is the cruellest month, With fickleness as its signature. Bio - R.S. is a denizen of India who writes Poetry to find harmony in life. She graduated with Honours in English and loves to read and write poetry. She rises early to feel inspired with the morning star and create new rhymes. Instagram - @thepoetrywindmill Comments: I love the personification of April. It’s beautiful how you discuss the traits of the month to mean more than a season but you go on to list visuals and feelings that occur to the persona with exquisite language. I felt really moved by the balance of feeling and visuals that you painted as well. Desiderium by Jason Wu The past acts as an aide-memoire, reminding you of evanescent events and those that span a long time, constantly giving a poignant sensation. No matter how ignoble one may feel, concordance and eudaimonia free from restraint allows your soul to return to its peaceful state, letting one be free of lost desires. Bio - Jason is a determined writer with dreams of becoming a author. He is also a volunteer/localization expert for Lemcnsun Entertainment and Soul Tide. Instagram - @editor_masterwu Comments - The use of vocabulary is masterful to bring out the message of reminiscing the past! I love how the second stanza is hopeful, and reminds us that we can be free of the memories of the past. Short but sweet! A Love-Stricken Fraud by Shu when i see you, all the way across the room, i feel a twinge in my heart. i don’t know why, but i blush when you come near me, and i love it when you speak. my friends say i should try. but wouldn’t that be a bad idea? i have no clue how to talk to you. your presence makes my brain melt. that’s what all the love-stricken people write, isn’t it? should i write that too, despite not being able to fall in love, just so i can fit in? i stare at the poem, then rip it out and toss it away. Bio - Shu is an Asian Canadian in high school. They're interested in politics, history, typology, K-pop, and of course, writing. He has a love for weird reels, cats, and almost every dark-coloured aesthetic in existence. Instagram - @wlvshuu Comments - This encapsulates the idea of a fresh, young love well. I love the natural feeling of flow and stream-of-consciousness, nearly like a diary from a coming-of-age movie. The end is a brilliant twist that is like a breath of fresh air. A poem by Aki Rayne the colors that you've painted me in are all the wrong shade now. the words that found a way to leave my throat come out wrong. and my image is tainted with something murky and dark. casting a shadow on all that had once been my light. a change that is irreversible. and I will forever be marred with the aftermath of a changed opinion because what others think you to be is all that you are and ever will be. they put the words in your mouth but you're the one who's pleading for another chance on your knees. but you're the one in shackles on the ground for everyone to see. the painting "ruined by the people," not more than a forgotten memory. Bio - Aki is another eighteen year old who's trying to find their place in the world. Aki is slightly obsessed with writing, and you'll find poetry, details about their wip and things like moodboards and interactive posts as well on their account. Poetry is Aki’s coping mechanism and they hope their poems are something that others can resonate with. Instagram - @writeyourwoes.aki Comments - This was a fast-paced read that described anguish and anger well. The constant listing of all the bad things from the persona’s perspective are brisk but intense. The middle that reveals why they are so upset is done well and the twist towards the end, the switching of roles is a great twist. Dawn: A Terza Rima by Vastriane "Did being late become your brand, my child?" I felt myself grow older with a sigh and die with work and children in my mind. The door unpeeled itself, divulged the sky, then all at once the world unravelled true: while hums of leaves replayed a sapling's cry, I squint against the shine of morning dew, I see the tree seemed smaller, branches skinnier, and the leaves were less distressed like it was new. Oh, how the sun reflected years of blur and the wind carried me like mother did years ago, before the labor meant “I’m happier,” and shadow was my fear— now friend and foe. "I can't believe I'm late for freshman year!" That sounds like a rainbow fading in glow... Truly, the rainbow vanished and the sun appeared; it opened its eyes like it did back then, when I touched her first, my sapling, dear. I sigh— relieved. The door's agape again. Bio - Ianna Reign, writing under her pseudonym Vastriane, at the age of twenty-one, is currently an undergraduate student in University of Sto Tomas in the Philippines. She is majoring in Bachelor of Arts, Creative Writing, and is pursuing the art of poetry. She is an aspiring novelist and poet, greatly inspired by POC musicians, authors, and artists. Instagram - @vastriane Comments - A thought-provoking piece. The universal feeling of one being late and embarrassed in front of the class is a great start. The rhyme in this poem is beautiful. The description of nature and the apparent theme of growing up is demonstrated well together. I Thought Of You Again by Allison i thought of you again Not because i missed you But because the memory of you sticks like molars rooted in the gums, unrelenting and stubborn. Can't stop the odor of bile and teardrops, not like soap and unwrapped erasers like how it used to be. i thought of you again, Not because i want you to come back But because i see you standing in the crossroads of my mind again Ordering soft pork buns and crispy scallion pancakes… Sometimes i want to let go of that memory i want a seagull to swoop down and pluck you out of my mind, Wipe you away like a soup stain at the corner of my mouth, Watch you disappear into a crowd like a stranger (even though you already have), i thought of you again Not because you are a simple muse for my sappy poetry But because i loved you in all forms love can take, And you mean more to me than words can ever capture. And i assume I'm supposed to wait until your color fades Like the lettering of old newspapers And maybe I’ll read them again from time to time Until the thought of you dwindles away. Bio - Allison Kwan is a 19-year-old student currently undertaking a biology degree but is a writer at heart. You can find her cultivating her inner zen by practicing yoga, huddled in bed reading fictional novels and learning new languages in her free time. Instagram - @cloudykorner Comments - Grief is portrayed well. Insanely natural flow and I love the sense of denial and missing of a person which I could with every memory described. The diverse comparisons lend this piece a sense of freshness with every line. She don’t need a crown by Tapasya Bhardwaj She didn't need a crown She has a sword in her hands, She can even cut the bodies. But now she is sitting there silently, maybe counting the buried memories. She is confident like a lioness, don't need a king to keep her safe. She is a bird who belongs to the sky, one day she'll fly away after burning her cage. She is a sword with diamond, as dangerous as she is sweet. She is aware of herself very well, quit already if you can't take her heat. She is a rose with thorns, won't let you touch her delicate side. She has covered her beautiful face, in order to save you; not to hide. She's already a queen, don't need a king, don't need a castle, she lives in our heart. With poison flowing in her veins, she is alone enough to tear you apart. She don't need a crown on her head, her sword is enough for her identity. If you think she is not strong, then you're only alive because of her serenity. Bio - Tapasya Bhardwaj, a young writer, trying to explore the world of words and dive in it. Loves reading, writing, art, rain and music. She believes that every word needs to be woven to form a poem. Instagram - @laxmisharmabtp123 Comments - I loved how empowering this was. The various comparisons of the persona are beautiful and so is the rhyme. I also adore the self-awareness the persona has as it brings home the theme of independence in a woman and the ending warning truly captures the danger she poses. To learn more about the artists, visit our instagram account @rewritethestarsreview and follow the link to the respective contributors' pages.
- Friendship Day Feature
To celebrate Friendship Day on August 6th, we asked writers from all across the world to submit their friendship-themed writing to be published on our blog. These amazing submissions are paired with feedback from our editors Bri, Smrithi, and Ava. Enjoy the crème de la crème of submissions as you reminisce on your own friendships! POETRY Haikus: Honeyed Dedication stuck to your knuckles won’t budge; stay when needed most through treach’rous troubles. recognize as sweet when times are happy, carefree-- grateful for before. by Jules Duve Instagram: @jules_duve Bio: Jules Duve is a Filipino American high school student in North Carolina. They enjoy literature through many mediums: reading, writing, editing, and even the study of language itself. They plan to pursue archaeological linguistics and a life filled with writing, from typing unseen poetry in their notes app to analyzing the occasional classic. Category: Poetry - Haiku(s) Inspiration: This poem is inspired by my personal friendships. My friends would stick by me even when I tried to purposefully push them away. Later, I found that I admired their dedication and appreciated that they continued to support me. Many of my peers I've discussed this with have gone through similar situations, and it's my hope that others my age may relate as well. Feedback from Smrithi: This set of two haikus is an example of how you don’t need a lot of words or pages to connect with readers- all you need is 24 words. I love how effortlessly this piece flows. The duality between the two haikus is showcased masterfully and I love the contrast between the two ideas. Both however connect to the theme of friendship and it is definitely something all our readers will be able to relate to. I hope everyone found a piece of themselves in this piece just like I did :) Ties in Turmoil Wrapped in fake gold foil, Roots tangled above the soil, Friends and foes do coil. by Isabella Norris Instagram: @_isabella.norris_ Bio: Isabella is a sixteen, almost seventeen-year-old from Canada. Some hobbies of hers are crocheting, reading, running, and writing. She also enjoys making niche playlists but is unsure if that qualifies as a hobby. People that inspire her are Angela Davis, Emily Dickinson, Pam Muñoz Ryan, and Sappho. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: What inspired me to write this haiku was a recent friendship breakup I went through. I think that is very relatable for teens, as we are at an age where we are slowly but surely emotionally maturing, and as we evolve, we are bound to outgrow people. Feedback from Smrithi: This piece is certainly interesting as on its surface it seems like three unrelated phrases. But when you read the inspiration behind the piece and begin to unravel the mysteries of this piece, you realize there’s a lot more than what meets the eye. The implications of this short poem, the connotations of words like ‘fake’, ‘tangled’, ‘friends and foes’ - all of them create a twisted web of interpretations that together paint a picture of how friendships aren’t always what they seem like. I love this piece and I love how the author has chosen to write it! Friendship Filled with gratitude. For I found a friendship like, A blanket of love. by Bushra Ali Instagram: @calm_peace Bio: Bushra Ali is a poet and writer from Pakistan. She's been living in this enthralling world of writing since her childhood. The spark of storytelling and dancing with words was ignited in heart by the countless books she read in her school library. She believes in the saying that ‘Everyone has a story to tell’, and she chooses to write her stories by her words. Bushra showcased her writings mainly through social media platforms and then made her way to a few magazines. She admires and has a passionate love for literature and all that holds. Bushra aspires to publish her own books someday. You can read more of her work at her Instagram account @calm_pace. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: True friendships are indeed a blessing. I am lucky because I am surrounded by people who always support me with their genuine love. Friendships provide you a home in a state of despair. A warm blanket of love that you drape yourself with on a gloomy day. Feedback from Smrithi: This is a heartwarming short piece that speaks about the importance of friendships in our daily life. I love how the piece is written and how it flows across the formatting of a haiku. The italicization of the last line is particularly impactful as it highlights the enormity of a good friendship in our lives. Excellent haiku! Grieving Together Then, we haunt your flat, toothbrush dangling from teeth. Only you remain. by Rachael Aimee Instagram: @rachaelaimee.art Bio: Rachael Aimee is a young writer based in South-East London with an interest in unravelling the body to find what lurks beneath, through experimental form, sticky language, and grief. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: This haiku is about finding rock bottom, struggling to do the smallest things to keep going, and a friend remaining there when everything else is lost. the power of friendship is often underestimated in life, but grief is a time where it shows itself to be stronger than we'd all thought. Feedback from Smrithi: I am in awe of this piece. In three sentences, the author manages to convey a feeling with multiple layers and many different aspects of it. I love the idea behind this piece and how the author has chosen to execute it. It conveys both a melancholic and an eerie atmosphere at once, and leaves an impact on the reader. Excellently done! Everyday Ice cream on the roof, relishing in the sunset, our backs to the world. by Chi Le Instagram: @lychee_sept Bio: Chi Le is a Vietnamese high-school student who enjoys reading, watching and reading. She is fascinated by English Literature and all small, everyday things that pique her interest. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: This is the image that would pop up in my mind whenever I think about friendship. Having your best pal beside you, you just know instantly that they will always have your back, even if it means that they have to turn theirs on the world. Feedback from Smrithi: This piece immediately brings a single and vivid image to our mind- one that we all would’ve experienced in one form or the other. A day with our friends, carefree and happy, as we take in the comfort of not being alone in the world. I adore how this is written and how it brings up memories for the reader. Splendidly done! i’ll always want to do your makeup Love is the lipstick In my hand, tracing your lips With soft devotion by Andrea Wagner Instagram: @redpandrea Bio: Andrea Wagner is a graduate student in English lit and rhetoric as well as an editor for Penumbra, Stan State's literary journal. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: It's a queer piece about loving a girl and doing her makeup. Might seem basic, but I feel like the simplicity of a haiku really captures the fragility of the moment. Feedback from Smrithi: As the author mentioned in their note on the inspiration, this short poem captures a single moment in time. The choice of the moment, the phrasing of the sentences, the title - all of it corresponds to paint a picture more effectively than a longer piece could’ve. I love the underlying themes and messages behind this poem- how the author illustrates that love isn’t grand gestures or outlandish dates but a simple moment that symbolizes mutual trust and affection. This one made me smile and I hope you smile too :) From me to you From me to you, a binding thread of fate, a bridge that melds our souls. by Alice Instagram: @aliceswips Bio: Alice is an aspiring young writer from Italy who has been pouring her heart on paper since her childhood. She is a night owl who lives in her own wonderland and draws inspiration from her experiences, passions and emotions. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: “In a few lines, I've tried to describe the strong and unbreakable bond between two friends, symbolized by both a thread and a bridge. The thread, woven by fate, aims to represent a tight connection between them that's nearly impossible to break, while the bridge symbolizes the overcoming of differences and distances to create a solid link and direct communication between the two individuals.” Feedback from Bri: Short but sweet. I love the complexity of the words, even though seemingly simple, they can mean a variety of things. The mention of the folklore is beautiful and how it represents a path between two people and remains connected; the idea of souls meaning it’s deeper than just two people physically being together in any way and things can be overcome to bring people together. Together, We Drunk the Sun she was late for tea and the moon remained un-pink. but warmth? we’re a choice. by Christopher Tang Social Media: @chris.tang15 (Insta) , chris_tang15 (Twitter) Bio: Christopher Tang is a Writing MA student at Warwick university, where he also writes for The Tab and was appointed Editor-in-Chief at The Tab Warwick. Specialising in poetry/non-fiction, he intends to pursue art and entertainment journalism in the future, and later publish his own debut poetry collection. His creative work can be found in numerous publications such as Outlander Magazine, Seaside Gothic and RUBY Literary. Category: Poetry - Haiku Inspiration: “I met my best friend over two years ago now. We decided to meet for bubble tea and watch the famous pink moon rise on our university campus. But she was late for 10mins for tea, and the pink moon never appeared. it was just normal moon coloured. Yet, it didn’t need to be pink, and she didn’t need to be on time. Everything she does for me, as my best friend, is enough. Her simplicity is perfect. And despite that cold, barely Spring night where we stayed up to try and find the moon, I had never felt warmer. I think this is what speaks to youth nowadays - we’re always told to be something MORE, when in reality, we are just enough. we are warm. we are on time. we are pink.” Feedback from Bri: A raw yet warming, profound piece. I love the idea the friendship is about forgiveness, staying when things don’t always go right and choice. I think being late to meeting with someone is something common and important in friendships but it can be forgiven through compassion and maintain a strong friendship; appreciating that someone is enough even when they’re not always meeting expectations. The message that people are always told they can be more can be abused so I love that you recognise that and bring home the message that we’re always enough. Sounds of Summer Windows down, fresh air, fountain drink fizz, quaint laughter— Summer night music. by Xalynn Perez Instagram: @xaeforshort Bio: Xalynn is a writer currently residing in New Braunfels, Tx. She enjoys local coffee shops, reading, and film photography. You can find previous work published in the Fall ‘22 issue of The Creative Zine. Category: Poetry - Haiku Feedback from Ava: Three descriptive lines that capture the platonic ideal of friendship. Reading this haiku allowed me to be transported into the scene that is described. The quintessential feeling of friendship without need for a mention of another person. Everyone has had a moment like this with their friends and this haiku produces a sense of nostalgia for those times. Conventional Poetry: Lose a Friend It’s always sad to lose a friend I just know that they’ll forget me. And I always think that the next time I see them They’ll act like they never met me. I’m not saying it’s their fault, I know I’m pretty forgettable. People will come and they’ll always go, I just find it so regrettable. That I’ll keep missing people, That won’t even remember that they lost me. And we’ll all keep moving on, and I won’t really acknowledge what it cost me. That I’m not even a footnote in their stories, While they were a whole chapter in mine And I’ll never really tell them, But I’ll still talk about it and rhyme. And life will just keep moving on, like it’s been known to do. But if I ever finally write a book, just know that one of those poems will be about you by Mayhem Instagram: @w.rite.now Bio: A writer who is always wrestling with the thoughts in her head, in an effort to mold them into a form of expression that may or may not be understood by others Category: Poetry - Conventional Feedback from Smrithi: This poem is absolutely beautiful! I have a soft spot for poems with rhyming couplets because they always read so effortlessly and like a song. This poem conveys such a simple idea in a profound way and I love the choice of words- especially the contrast between a footnote and a chapter. The last line had me smiling in a bittersweet way. As everybody would’ve lost friends at some point or the other, I’m sure this poem will be relatable to a lot of our readers! Know that if they were meant to leave, there’s nothing you can do to make them stay </3 Heart Invasion we sat on a bench at the park laughing to every stupid thing we said. we talked about life, about people. i said I don't like people invading my privacy. she replied, yes, I don't like people invading my privacy too, and the most private thing to me is my heart — but you already claimed it. by Adedokun Ibrahim Anwar Twitter: @IbraaheemAde1 Bio: Born on a Friday in October, Adedokun Ibrahim Anwar is a homeschooled Nigerian, a teen writer who was born and raised in the suburbs of Lagos. He writes in a voice that is meaningful communication, for himself, for those who seek to be touched in places where humans can’t. His work has appeared or are forthcoming in literary journals, including Brittle Paper, Eunoia Review, African Writer Magazine, The Kalahari Review, The Shallow Tales Review and elsewhere. If you don't find him catching up with late night deadlines, you find him building bricks with toddlers. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: I was on a call with a loved one. She was staring the things she dislike, then I mentioned something, her reply sparked the poem up my head. It's a piece you wouldn't want to have it in your submission file without publishing. You are hungry for this, I know. Feedback from Bri: I love the simple yet profound themes of this piece. The choice of first person really helps to make this shine and as you said in your explanation, it does well in discussing different feelings. I love the reciprocation between two people to demonstrate what a friendship can be too. It’s not just having a good time, but having a sad experience and sharing it; being vulnerable, intimate and sharing private things. two There was something special about tonight: I saw you there, under the dim lights, the reminiscing memories started to shine and once again, your soul ran to mine. Your hands lift my heart: it feels less heavy than it did in the void of your absence. Your voice takes me away from madness, it will make me love again, when I’m ready. I didn’t know words could sew the cracks on my tongue, but yours do, and no kiss, no touch could heal the bruise like the sole standing next to you. If our ghosts could tangle together, I would wish for a swiffer path to heaven. by Teresa M Medina Instagram: @louvre_in_blue Bio: She is a high school student and (occasional) poet. Too busy and too tired. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: I think the most important thing about the poem is that it doesn't treat friendship as a kind of relationship less valuable or deep than romantic love, which is something that is often shown in media. I wrote it about a friend of mine, and I believe this kind of relationships are beautiful and deserve to be written. Feedback from Bri: A heartwarming piece. I enjoyed the gradual introduction with the context of time and how the relationship was introduced and particularly, the idea of two souls. The emphasis on how the person feels better when they are with the other person is lovely and very relatable. I also love the idea that this person is unique and they want to be together. Connection Connections, like red thread Tied together, non-binding Easily broken, yet It grows stronger at every bullet point Wear and tear The red string's been through it all Colors fading into merging grey Still, it stands tall. Bonds unbroken strings out of shape A connection so frequently called upon It's best friends forever by Deeksha Instagram: @wizardee.in Bio: Deeksha is a teen writer, poet and an aspiring author. If she's not on her computer frantically writing then she's probably on the couch reading another book or taking a long walk. Some of her other hobbies include driving, coding and art. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: The anime show "your name" inspired the red-string theme. In Japanese culture a string is always used to demonstrate bonds and I find that to be very intriguing, very beautiful. It was also inspired by Taylor Swift's song "invisible string" I don't believe in fate but I believe that when you meet someone and form a connection with them, the string is attached and even though it might end up being broken someday, all of us know that the string never really detaches from inside us. Friends are these unbroken but severely worn threads, and some of these threads will never break, as though they were never meant to..... "isn't it magical to think that there was some invisible string attaching you to me?” Feedback from Bri: A sweet piece. I love how you took inspiration from the idea of the red thread of fate and described the red thread and the persistence of it through beautiful descriptions. The beautiful metaphor really lends to the piece when you discuss how the colour faded into a grey, yet the friendship still persists. Room 930 (or, movie night at Phoebe’s) Six girls pile on a twin XL, half-watching Ladybird/Twilight/Pitch Perfect. I am basking in the hum of the projector and the chorus of gossip/laugh/cry. I, an only child never short of sisters. Family magnolia blooming and sap-dripped over the glow of a film that bathes us in the too-tight dorm. (I was once thirteen, atheistic girlhood praying for joy like this, crying it will get better, it will get better, it must get better.) by Brianna DeLima Ifland Instagram: @briannaifland Bio: Brianna Ifland is a Filipino-American creative writing and multimedia production student at the University of Arkansas, where she has proudly founded the Film Honors Society. Her work is marked by interpersonal relationships, culture, identity, and mental health. Despite her theatre-heavy background, she now focuses on expanding her storytelling to prose, poetry, and film. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: I remember being a young teenager and envying the friend groups who would hang out all of the time. I couldn't drive, and my parents were a little strict. So, once I got to college, I was surrounded by friends. We developed a habit of having weekly, if not twice-a-week movie nights. Recovering from a breakup and the difficult transition to college, it was my friends who got me to the place I'm at now. I don't know where I would be without them. I wish I could tell my younger self that I would find people who truly understood me, and I think that's expressed pretty well in this piece. Feedback from Ava: Beautiful imagery that really places you in the dorm room with the narrator. The joy of finding family after having wished for one for so long is palpable. I especially adore the ending parentheses and what the contents add to the piece, reflective and bittersweet, a reminder that there are so many great things ahead in life. Love Poem To My Best Friends Who Live In Different Corners Of The World In another life, we play Jenga in my living room on a Saturday evening. When you knock over the tower, we all laugh before our second glass of fruit-punch, fairy lights twinkling over us. In another life, our soft moments happen in real time and not over glass screens, and I give you a hug when I see you cry. In another life, I call you less & less because I can always come over. I make your bed when you can’t get up. I know what you like for dinner after a difficult day, & what levels of spice you can tolerate. In another life, I bouquet the stars and lay them at our feet. I tag along for hospital visits. I make sure you catch your train. In another life, we spend all night cursing out the coworker who makes you cry. In another life, my world exists within smaller boundaries, and that makes it larger than it has ever been. by Phoenix Tesni Social Media: @PhoenixTesni (Instagram and Twitter) Bio: Phoenix Tesni (she/her) is a twenty-three year-old poet from New Delhi. A Best Small Fictions finalist, her works also appear in Surging Tide, Limelight Review, Sage Cigarettes, Celestite Poetry, and many other places. Phee likes to dedicate her life to consuming & creating art, indulging in all forms of South-Korean multimedia, and petting as many cats as possible. You can find her at phoenixtesni.com or on Twitter/Instagram @PhoenixTesni. Category: Poetry - Conventional Feedback from Ava: A poem that truly captures the longing that comes with long distance. An imagining of a life you could have with the people that you love so dearly that live so far away. The parallel structure that carries throughout the piece is a great way to show that there are so many things you could be doing with your friends but that you can’t. I fell in love with the metaphor “I bouquet the stars and lay them at our feet”. It is so visual and such a gorgeous picture of love and devotion. friendship Content warning: Implied mental health struggles the support of a friend can mean everything. a single soul to talk to when the world is too busy to care. a smile that returns a single sliver of light to your day. a hand to hold and pull you up, an non-judgemental hug. the unfailing support of a true friend has the power to change a life. by Luca Instagram: @cracked.illusion Bio: Luca(they/them) writes poetry for fun alongside being in full time education. They also enjoy reading, listening to and playing music. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: This poem is for people who’ve been struggling with life (especially mental health, but it isn’t explicitly mentioned) and how a friend has helped them out of it, whether they knew it or not. Feedback from Ava: The power of friendship cannot be overstated and this poem touches on a vital aspect of that. Friends can pull you through the darkest moments of your life, and can give you the support you need in your most difficult moments. Luca does a great job of showing how just one moment of love or kindness from a friend can mean a world of difference. A well done, important poem. To Know and To Be Friends To know someone is one thing: You see them in class, you’re in the same club. Close enough for a polite glance in their direction, Far enough for an unfriendly snub. But to be friends is something else entirely: Sometimes you may find yourselves miles apart, Trapped between unspoken barriers, Or in the midst of an argument that may break a heart. But you will still be friends at the end of the day. For you both share that longing closeness, That happiness that never deserves to end. And friendship is simply knowing this. by Avery Leloup Instagram: @avery_tortellini Bio: Avery Leloup is a curious soccer fanatic from New England. When they’re not reading a book or watching Messi play, you might find them kayaking, cycling, or writing. Category: Poetry - Conventional Inspiration: I was pretty inspired to write this based on my own experiences with friendship. I know every teen struggles with friendships in one form or another, and I think they might relate to my own struggle of growing apart & even occasionally fighting those friends that I love. It’s a pretty universal experience in my opinion, so I kinda just hope the poem can resonate with people! Feedback from Ava: A unique, but true take on friendships. This poem reminds the reader that friendship is not always a smooth road, that it comes with obstacles and issues. It also reminds readers, however, that true friendship is worth fighting for, that it rises above the difficulties. I love the progression seen over this poem: from acquaintances, to friends in a rough patch, to two people that care deeply for each other regardless. A “ happiness that never deserves to end”. Really beautiful contemplation on how friendships grow and change. CREATIVE NON-FICTION Telegram: letter to my best friend i’ve probably known you for half my life now though i’m not sure my math’s right - & it feels so much longer. it’s in the way i know that you like to draw freckles on your face with that brown eyeliner & i know how you hate rucola & love making pinterest boards for people you love (i have one too). it’s in the way you know how my hair feels like when we’re washing the bleach out & how i hate knees & love isopods & pigeons. it’s in the way all the pictures of myself that i like were taken by you. it’s in the songs we send each other. we haven’t seen each other in so long & listening to your voice messages made my heart ache. all yours. by ephraim Instagram: @phytoparasit Bio: ephraim (he/him) is a self taught artist and occasional poet. his art revolves around the exploration of identity, space, nature, history and technology. Category: Creative Non-Fiction - Telegram Inspiration: N/A Feedback from Smrithi: This piece is poignant and evokes emotion immediately from the reader. I love how they’ve mentioned the small things that they remember about their friend, thus reminding us that when we lose a friend, it’s not the big moments we remember but the little joys we almost forgot. My favorite part of this piece is the descriptive ability of the writer and how everyone can relate to this piece, even if not to the specific aspects of it. Wonderful piece and it made me feel so many different things from nostalgia to bittersweetness <3 To My Bestie To My Bestie, I’ve never told you how much you mean to me, nor will I ever tell you. I think we both know what we mean. Just in case you don’t, here’s a short letter. You are the person who gets me through school, life, and everything in between. You are the person I would drag to watch the sunrise at 5 am, but you would secretly enjoy it, even if you complained the whole time. I know you would. Because there is no other “you”, and there is no other “us”. A year ago you asked me what our friendship meant. I was at a loss for words. Now I can only attempt to explain. Wherever you and I go in the future, I hope we will always stay in touch. I hope you will remember me, because I will always remember you. <3 Your Bestie by Grace Instagram: @snowflake12374 Bio: Grace is a teen who loves to read and write. Her favorite genre is fantasy, and her favorite book is Six of Crows. In her spare time, you can find her reading or procrastinating her work. Category: Creative Non-Fiction - Telegram Inspiration: I just really appreciate all my friends a lot, even if I don't show it to them. Feedback from Ava: Deep friendship so often transcends words. It can be hard to articulate your love for and bond with a person. This piece is simple but carries across this idea well. An understanding unspoken but a love still obvious and prominent. I feel like this piece emphasizes the idea of expressing love through action and the little things in daily life. It's a lovely letter to all those who love their friends and want to express it. Musing: Harmonizing At 2. AM It’s hard to find friends when you usually lose them… but when you find someone— someone you really connect with— you realize they’re worth fighting for. This morning, she dm’d me about a TV show we’ve become embarrassingly invested in. She shipped two guys who were head-over-heels in love with other girls so we agreed that they’re soulmates… just in the friends way. Maybe that’s the core of genuine friendship—like it’s meant to be— the way you just “get” each other. So you send her stupidly hilarious memes while the sun still rises. You indulge in oddly intellectual discussions about The Summer I Turned Pretty while wishing for waves and moonlit escapades to scintillating seashores. You vent about your exes and plot revenge on every boy unfortunate enough to mess with the wrong girls. You obsess over Taylor Swift together: belting “AND THAT’S THE WAY I LOVED YOUUU” simultaneously… in the dead of night… even though you’re worlds apart. It’s funny how distance has little effect on real friends because, while we can’t walk side by side, our minds remain in tandem and our thoughts still resonate on the same wavelength. I could have never guessed how my failure to wrangle tickets for the Eras Tour would be the tragedy that brought us together; it looks like our companionship blossomed from the dark depths of mutual disappointment. But the concert ended yesterday and it’s 2 a.m. and we’re still singing with all our hearts. by Claire Young Instagram: @graceclaire357 Bio: Claire is a rather unique specimen. Her ideal habitat is the seaside but she is always up for an adventure. She enjoys running in the rain and golfing when while the sun sets. She also really loves to read and write in her free time! Category: Creative Non-Fiction - Musing Feedback from Bri: A beautiful, rich piece. I love how you say friends and people are worth it. The exploration is beautiful in connecting the TV show with real life, making it relatable with vivid, universal depictions. I also love how you highlighted this is a friendship that’s online or long-distance and yet it can still be experienced in a rich, fulfilling way. I also love that you explained the origin story as it lends a sense of finality that solidifies the beauty of friendship. PROSE Short Stories: Removed from the Nest Content warnings: reference to Ukraine and the war, refugees, scared/traumatized child The train rolls into Prague, its antique metal doors rattling with each bump in the tracks. Clutched against a young girl’s chest, underneath her scarlet coat, is a cardboard tube, emptied of its potato chips. Her arms ache from embracing the container for nearly twenty-four hours, taking care to keep it horizontal so the contents sit most comfortably. Her eyes squeeze shut against the squeal of old brakes. A hand rests on her shoulder and she looks up to meet the gaze of her mother, as if to say we’re here. But she doesn’t actually say the words. Hundreds of Ukrainian refugees, and yet barely a word has been murmured the entire ride. They shuffle behind those in front of them. The station is full of new faces, ready to welcome survivors as they pour out of the train. The girl presses into her mother’s side, holding her single belonging closer. Then a smile steps forward, placed upon a middle-aged woman in a sterile white coat. And for the first time over these painful months, the girl feels like she can relax. She opens her coat to the woman and offers the tube. The Czech doctor takes it from her carefully, and peeks into the container through the clear, hole-punctured lid. Inside, black eyes stare back out, swallowed by green and yellow feathers. The budgie is scared, but alive, and is going to be safe now, along with its best friend and her mother, under the roof of the avian veterinarian. by J L Kies Instagram: @jl_kies Bio: J. L. Kies is a creative writing major and the editorial assistant for the 22nd issue of "juice," UWinnipeg's literary journal. Kies has a bird named “Pierogi” and special interests in horror and gaming (and, specifically, horror games), aspiring to one day work in the video game industry. Kies recently received an honourable mention from Elegant Literature, and debuted with a horror flash piece published by Litmora. Category: Prose - Short story Inspiration: I think it's topical for young people as it has to do with big international events (the Russian/Ukrainian war), and is based on true events. My inspiration for this piece was my late budgie and the deep, unexplainable bond we had. She was my best friend. Feedback from Smrithi: I adore this piece. The writing is captivating and immediately hooks the reader in. The story flows seamlessly, each aspect of it unfolding as we read further. I never knew such emotion could be packed in such a short story- but this writer has impressed me beyond words. The connection with friendship is unconventional and unique and I love how the writer has chosen to express the theme. Splendidly written piece, and one that brought a smile to my face. M-A-S-H It’s like this: you are raised without a liver. You are an inch too short to reach the cabinets. I am a stepstool. I am a filter and the metabolism. You are raised without a sister, and like that I was born. You are given a lover; he is taken away. I am in your room when he gives you the call. I hold you until the hunger and tears subside. Your grandmother forgets your name, and sepsis tucks her into the casket, gentle and in sleep. I drive you to your hometown, tissues sliding in the backseat. You believe there is a limb you are missing, a cigarette burn shot through the middle of the book, a second stomach that craves braid trains and M-A-S-H. You’ll end up a dentist, in a mansion, married to Jess Mariano, with two kids, a clown car, and twin fishtails swimming from your scalp to your back. You’ll end up two mountains, tectonic plates colliding and peaks yearning to touch. I am a bridge. I am a sherpa. I know your valleys and ridges. Swam in your basins. Laid in the spurs. You’ll end up learning what I’ve known all along: there is a complete world within you. by Brianna DeLima Ifland Instagram: @briannaifland Bio: Brianna Ifland is a Filipino-American creative writing and multimedia production student at the University of Arkansas, where she has proudly founded the Film Honors Society. Her work is marked by interpersonal relationships, culture, identity, and mental health. Despite her theatre-heavy background, she now focuses on expanding her storytelling to prose, poetry, and film. Category: Prose - Short Story Inspiration: When I was younger, I was under the impression that I was somehow missing or broken and required other people. I'm still learning interdependence and the coexistence of loving and truly caring for others without relying on them and, thus, reducing myself. I wrote M-A-S-H as an almost letter from the perspective of my friends, as well as it being a tribute to unabashed girlhood. Feedback from Ava: M-A-S-H does a great job of capturing what it is like to love your friends. To support them through tough times. To know them better than you know yourself to the point where it hurts. This story beautifully discusses how so deeply depending on others can make you lose a part of yourself. I really like the metaphor of M-A-S-H and how it encompasses nostalgia for simpler times when a blueprint for life could be laid out in front of you. The first few lines of this piece are my favourite, such a clear and gutting depiction of how vital friendship can be as a young girl, but the pains of it as well. My Best Friend Lives Underwater He can’t walk properly, and can’t fly either, he’s not made for the land or the sky, my best friend moved into the sea, because he feels more safe there, although he barely breathes, he dives deep, then floats and takes a breath or two, and he has built a home underwater, like life is like that and won’t get better. My best friend lives underwater, because he’s been exiled, he says, I don’t belong among you, among those who bruised him and mocked him, and I want to bring him back, back where he was born and raised, but he won’t come back to me, he says he doesn’t need roots, he’s not a tree, he’s turned into a sea creature, and he feels safe underwater, impermeable to pain, like the sea is the barrier that won’t let sadness touch him. My best friend swims with the dolphins and the fish and the whales, he rides the waves, like this has been his home forever, he’s safe there, he’s carefree, he’s built a home underwater, and he’s abandoned his old life, the land, me, he says he’s always been a mermaid, he found his tribe and he is happy finally, and when he waves at me, inviting me, calling me from afar, I stand still on the shore, like I’m a tree, like I have roots, and I long to wet my feet, but I am stuck, trapped, afraid and alone and deserted. by Mileva Anastasiadou Instagram: @happilander Twitter: @happymil_ Bio: Mileva Anastasiadou is a neurologist, from Athens, Greece and the author of "We Fade With Time" by Alien Buddha Press. A Pushcart, Best of the Net, Best Microfiction and Best Small Fictions nominated writer, her work can be found in many journals, such as the Chestnut Review, New World Writing, Milk Candy Review, the Bureau Dispatch, and others. Category: Prose - Short story Feedback from Ava: A thoughtful, metaphorical piece. The idea that people move through life so differently, react to their situations with such variation, but can still be friends is interesting. The image the author paints of her friend swimming free in the sea while she feels stuck and abandoned on land is really powerful. This story really carries across the concept of finding renewed life and peace somewhere new after difficulty. The reader can feel the excitement of the best friend but also the pain and longing of the narrator. Complex and intriguing. Follow us on instagram @rewritethestarsreview and these remarkable writers for more!
- Medium and Content: The Case of Insta Poetry
by Sripurna Majumdar What is a medium? For Marshall McLuhan, a Canadian philosopher who is known for his studies on media theory, medium is an extension of ourselves. Be it television, radio, books — everything in the world we see around us is a form of media. And every medium holds a content which often receives our primary attention. Whether it is the content provided by the TV channel that we see or the information written in a book that we read— the content of the medium is the thing that engages us most. However, we often fail to notice that each media form has their own message, too. In his 1964 book Understanding Media: The Extensions of Man, McLuhan proposed that the media, not the content that they carry should be the focus of study. ‘The medium is the message,’ he says. The content of a medium is easily grasped. But not so in the case of its character. Let us take the example of a movie. A movie like Inception plays on different levels of reality and distorts our conception of real time. Apart from its content, the movie as a medium plays with the conceptions of speed and time— radically changing our creative worldview. Here the character of a movie rather than content introduces changes of form and scale to human perceptions and creative imagination, a point often overlooked. Further, McLuhan proposes that the content of any medium is always another medium. Thus speech is the content of writing, writing is the content of print and so on. No medium is sacrosanct; each uses and discards portions from previously existing media forms. This eventually gives rise to a new medium which in turn introduces a new scale to human affairs. ‘Remediation’ describes the ability of media to borrow, absorb, replace or adapt to other media forms. Due to the constant interaction, media is a constantly evolving entity. Now let's turn to electronic literature. Broadly speaking, it refers to any digitally born literature. Examples may include fanfictions, cellphone novels or insta poetry. In the case of electronic literatures, the concept of technology is as important as textuality. The way of production is as indispensable as the content, and thus becomes a space for textual, artistic and technological expressions and creativity. In case of insta poetry, the overarching presence of the message of the medium becomes apparent. Its use of vintage filters, calligraphy, typewriters, hand typed pages and pre-digital objects gives rise to a sort of nostalgic aesthetic. Despite it being a digital form of literature, insta poetry evokes vibrant nostalgia for media that are now obsolete or outdated— a form of obsession for analogue media. This curious character of insta poetry of course has its own message. Instapoets ironically use the social media platform of Instagram to assert a so-called pristine, ink-and-paper notion of true poetry. This is an interesting feature of the current arena of electronic literature. The yearning for a form of media that is different from the electronic medium is apparent in the case of insta poetry. The attempt to fit the essence of hand-typed pages into the screen of gadgets is probably an essential attribute of the contemporary digital age. The medium, rather than the content, thus characterizes electronic literature, and more specifically, insta poetry. References: McLuhan, Marshall. Understanding Media: The Extensions of Man, The MIT Press, 1994. Bolter, Jay David and Grusin, Richard. Remediation: Understanding New Media, The MIT Press, 2000. Follow the author Sripurna on Instagram @sripurnamajumdar for more!
- Clean Fiction Recommendations
In today's ever-expanding literary landscape, finding fiction that provides not only an engaging storyline but also promotes wholesome values can be a challenge. Due to prevailing market preferences for intense conflict and drama, which can overshadow quieter, morally-driven narratives. Additionally, the subjective nature of "wholesome" values and varying cultural perspectives further complicates the search for stories that align with individual readers' criteria for positivity and virtue. However, for readers who yearn for literature free from explicit content and violence, there is a growing movement towards clean fiction. Debates about whether books with explicit content are considered a problem or not are subjective and context-dependent. It often involves a balance between freedom of expression, individual values, and age-appropriateness. Readers need a balance of clean fiction especially for young readers and teenagers, as it ensures they are exposed to content that aligns with their developmental stage and avoids explicit material that could be inappropriate and harmful. On the other hand, readers who prefer more explicit content can have significant influence on the publishing industry, literary trends, and societal discussion. They contribute to a substantial market demand for books, movies, and other forms of media that explore mature themes, including sexuality, violence, and graphic language. Works featuring explicit content often attract interest from filmmakers and television producers. Successful adaptations can further popularize the source material and wider audience, making it accessible to all ages and most likely expose the younger audience. With an emphasis on gripping narratives that steer clear of explicit material, this genre offers refreshing alternatives that appeal to readers of all ages. In this article, we will explore a selection of clean fiction recommendations that will not only entertain but also elevate the reader's spirit, fostering a sense of positivity and inspiration. So, whether you are looking for captivating stories to share with your family, seeking a break from intense themes, or simply aiming to uplift your reading experience, these clean fiction recommendations will guide you towards literary works that prioritize moral messages and celebrate the purity of storytelling. FANTASY: We Hunt The Flame Duology by Hafsah Faizal We Hunt the Flame is a captivating YA fantasy novel set in a magical world where two young warriors from opposite walks of life must embark on a perilous journey to find an ancient artifact that could save their kingdom from darkness. Zafira is a skilled hunter who disguises herself as a man in order to maintain her freedom and independence, while Nasir is a deadly assassin who does the bidding of his tyrannical father, the king. As they come together, they must learn to trust and rely on each other as they navigate dangerous terrain, mythical creatures, and treacherous villains in their quest to restore peace and prosperity to their realm. 2. The Caraval Trilogy by Stephanie Garber Caraval is a YA fantasy novel about two sisters, Scarlett and Tella, who escape their oppressive father and enter the magical world of Caraval, a once-a-year performance that takes place on a mysterious island. The sisters have always dreamed of attending, but when they finally arrive, they discover that the game is much darker and more dangerous than they ever imagined. Tella is drawn deeper into the secrets and intrigues of Caraval that she mysteriously disappears. The stakes are high as the sisters race against time to solve the game's cryptic clues and find Tella before it's too late. Along the way, Scarlett must grapple with her own insecurities and fears, while also confronting the dark secrets of her past that threaten to destroy everything she loves. With beautiful prose, vivid imagery, and a dash of romance, Caraval is a thrilling ride that will keep readers guessing until the very end. 3. Once Upon A Broken Heart Trilogy by Stephanie Garber Once Upon a Broken Heart is a captivating young adult trilogy by Stephanie Garber that follows the story of Evangeline Fox, an orphan girl who possesses an uncanny ability to heal others with her touch. One day, in her quest to find her true family, she stumbles upon the mysterious and alluring Julian, who promises to help her uncover the secrets of her past. But as she gets closer to Julian, Evangeline realizes that he too is hiding a dark past and that their fates are intertwined in unexpected ways. When the magical world of the Four Realms is threatened by a powerful curse, Evangeline and Julian embark on a daring adventure to save it, facing dangerous creatures, betrayal, and heartbreak along the way. With Garber's trademark lyrical prose, evocative world-building, and memorable characters, Once Upon a Broken Heart is a mesmerizing tale of love, loss, and redemption that will enchant readers of all ages. 4. All The Stars and Teeth Duology by Adalyn Grace All the Stars and Teeth is an epic high-fantasy novel by Adalyn Grace that takes place in an expansive world of magic and mystery. The story follows the fearless princess Amora Montara, who is destined to take over as the next ruler of the kingdom of Visidia. Though Amora is endowed with powerful magic and an unstoppable will, she has yet to prove her worthiness of the crown. In order to do so, she must pass a series of trials that will test her mettle and determine her fitness to rule. As Amora sets out on her journey, she is joined by a motley crew of allies, including a handsome rogue, a mermaid thief, and a vengeful pirate queen. Together, they must uncover the secrets of their world and confront the nefarious forces that threaten to destroy it. With its richly detailed world-building, heart-pounding action, and layered characters, All the Stars and Teeth is a thrilling adventure that will leave readers breathless from start to finish. The Inheritance Trilogy by N.K. Jemisin The Inheritance Trilogy by N.K. Jemisin is a remarkable fantasy saga that transports readers to a richly woven world where gods, mortals, and the blurred lines between them take center stage. What makes this trilogy stand out is its commitment to "clean fiction," a literary approach that doesn't shy away from exploring the raw and complex aspects of human nature and the divine. As the tale unfolds across three interconnected novels, readers are immersed in a narrative that unflinchingly examines the moral dilemmas, emotional intricacies, and multifaceted relationships between characters. Jemisin's storytelling doesn't rely on simplistic notions of right and wrong, but instead invites readers to grapple with the profound consequences of choices made by characters in this intricate and thought-provoking world. In doing so, The Inheritance Trilogy challenges conventions of traditional fantasy, presenting a compelling and refreshingly authentic portrayal of the human condition and the complexities of power, love, and identity. 5. The Riddle-Master Trilogy by Patricia A. Mckillip "The Riddle-Master Trilogy" by Patricia A. McKillip is a timeless fantasy series that enchants readers with its immersive world-building. This trilogy explores the concept of "clean fiction" by weaving together a captivating narrative that focuses on the elegance of storytelling and the profound impact of language and riddles. In this enchanting realm, the power of words and riddles is at the heart of the story. The protagonist, a young prince, must navigate a world filled with mysteries and enigmatic puzzles that hold the keys to his destiny and the fate of his land. As he delves deeper into the intricate tapestry of riddles, readers are drawn into a world where language is both a weapon and a source of revelation. "The Riddle-Master Trilogy" stands out for its commitment to crafting a narrative that is free from gratuitous violence and explicit content, allowing readers of all ages to immerse themselves in a rich, clean fantasy world. In this tale, the power of imagination and the beauty of language take center stage, inviting readers to engage in a thought-provoking and enchanting journey that celebrates the magic of words and storytelling. URBAN FANTASY: The Renegades Trilogy by Marissa Meyers In Renegades by Marissa Meyers, the story takes place in a world where superheroes known as "Renegades" have brought peace and order to society after years of chaos and anarchy. Nova, a young girl with a troubled past, has grown up in this world, and now she has a singular goal – to destroy the Renegades. Nova has witnessed the many flaws and failures of the Renegades, and knows that they are not the heroes that everyone thinks they are. Determined to get her revenge, she infiltrates their ranks and becomes one of the Renegades' own – all the while plotting to bring them down from within. Things get complicated when Nova falls for a charismatic Renegade named Adrian, even as she struggles with her own beliefs and loyalties. As the stakes get higher and the lines between right and wrong become increasingly blurred, Nova and Adrian find themselves on opposite sides of a conflict that threatens to tear society apart. With its action-packed plot, complex characters, and twisty tale of conflicting loyalties, Renegades is a thrilling ride that will have readers eagerly turning the pages until the very end. 2. Skyward Series by Brandon Sanderson In Brandon Sanderson's Skyward, humanity has been driven to the brink of extinction on a desolate planet constantly under attack from an alien race called the Krell. Spensa Nightshade, a fiercely determined young woman, dreams of becoming a pilot to defend her people and escape the ground-up prison that her world has become. However, her troubled past and her famous pilot father being labeled a coward haunt her every step. Against all odds, Spensa earns a spot in flight school, where she faces prejudice, rivalry, and a demanding flight instructor named Cobb. As she struggles to prove herself and uncover the truth about her father, she discovers an ancient ship hidden beneath the surface of her planet—a ship that may hold the key to humanity’s survival. With the fate of her people and her own journey of self-discovery intertwining, Spensa must become more than just a pilot, but a symbol of hope in a war-ravaged world. Skyward is an exhilarating sci-fi adventure filled with intricate world-building, heart-pounding aerial combat, and a courageous protagonist who must confront both her own fears and the truth about her world to find redemption and save those she loves. 3. Steelheart Trilogy by Brandon Sanderson In Brandon Sanderson's Steelheart, the world has been completely transformed by the arrival of Epics, humans with superhuman abilities who rule with an iron fist and crush any resistance. David Charleston has lived his entire life in a world ruled by Epics, and has a single goal - to avenge his father's death at the hands of Steelheart, the most powerful and invincible Epic of them all. Armed with only a handful of clues about Steelheart's weakness, David joins a group of rebels known as the Reckoners, who are dead-set on bringing down Steelheart and saving humanity. The Reckoners operate in secret, striking at the Epics' weakest points and avoiding detection - but as David becomes more involved with the group, he soon discovers that their methods are far from foolproof, and that they may be playing a far more dangerous game than they ever imagined. With his own life on the line and the fate of the world at stake, David must navigate a web of deception and betrayal to uncover the truth about Steelheart, his own true power, and the secret that holds the key to destroying the Epics. Fast-paced and action-packed, Steelheart is a thrilling tale of rebellion, revenge, and redemption that will keep readers on the edge of their seats until the very last page. 4. The Midnight Bargain by C.L. Polk "The Midnight Bargain" by C.L. Polk is a captivating historical fantasy novel that skillfully combines its enchanting magical world with an emphasis on "clean fiction." Set in a society where women's magical abilities are suppressed and marriage is the ultimate goal, this novel explores the complexities of ambition, love, and societal expectations within the confines of a clean and thought-provoking narrative. Beatrice Clayborn is determined to have it all. She yearns for a future where she can both harness her magical abilities and find true love. However, societal norms and expectations stand in her way. "The Midnight Bargain" tackles these themes with a delicate touch, avoiding explicit content while delving deep into the challenges and choices faced by its characters. As Beatrice navigates the constraints of her world, readers are invited to ponder questions of gender roles, autonomy, and personal sacrifice within a beautifully crafted, clean narrative. This novel's emphasis on clean fiction allows readers of all ages to engage with its compelling story and timeless themes, making it a memorable and thought-provoking read. 5. The Bone Season by Samantha Shannon "The Bone Season" by Samantha Shannon is a mesmerizing debut novel that not only introduces readers to a complex and intriguing dystopian world but also places a unique emphasis on the importance of clean fiction. Shannon's storytelling prowess shines through her vividly crafted universe, unique characters, and thought-provoking themes, all while highlighting the enduring power of untainted literature. Set in the year 2059, the story unfolds in the city of Scion London, a society where clairvoyants, individuals with supernatural abilities, are hunted and imprisoned. The protagonist, Paige Mahoney, is a rare type of clairvoyant known as a dreamwalker. Her ability to enter the minds of others in a dream state makes her a coveted asset in the underground criminal syndicate she works for. As Paige navigates the treacherous world of clairvoyants and the oppressive Scion regime, she becomes an unlikely symbol of resistance. Throughout the narrative, forbidden books and knowledge become powerful symbols of resistance against the oppressive regime. Clean fiction represents the purest form of storytelling, untainted by censorship or manipulation. The preservation of these stories becomes not just a literary pursuit but a form of rebellion against a government that seeks to control every aspect of society, including the written word. "The Bone Season" also touches on thought-provoking themes such as power, oppression, and the consequences of blind obedience to authority. The novel encourages readers to question the moral complexities of a society that devalues individuality and creativity in its quest for control while emphasizing the crucial role that clean fiction plays in preserving the integrity of storytelling. ROMANCE: Better Than the Movies by Lynn Painter In Lynn Painter's Better Than The Movies, teenaged Liz Buxbaum is a hopeless romantic who lives her life through the lens of classic romantic movies of the 90s and early 2000s. When her longtime crush, Michael, suddenly shows interest in her, she thinks she's found her happily ever after. But as she navigates the ups and downs of her first relationship, Liz realizes that real life is much messier than the movies. As Liz discovers more about herself and her feelings, she learns that sometimes love doesn't look like what we see in the movies and that the path to finding happiness can be filled with missteps and heartache. With a warm and funny voice, Better Than The Movies is a heart-warming coming-of-age story that explores self-discovery, friendship, and the balancing act of finding true love. 2. The Do-Over by Lynn Painter In Lynn Painter's The Do-Over, 16-year-old Emelia has the opportunity to relive the past two years of her life when she wakes up one morning to find herself back at the start of her freshman year in high school. Armed with her future knowledge, Emelia is determined to make different choices in order to change her life for the better and avoid the mistakes she has made before. However, as she navigates her way through adolescence with a new perspective, Emelia realizes that changing the past is not as easy as it seems. She must confront the consequences of her choices and consider the impact they may have on her relationships, including her budding romance with the charming and popular Aiden. The Do-Over is a thought-provoking and entertaining story about the struggle to balance the need for change and the acceptance of who we are, where we come from, and where we're heading. 3. The Bodyguard by Katherine Center In "The Bodyguard" by Katherine Center, Hannah Brooks, an unassuming Executive Protection Agent, finds herself in an unexpected role when she's hired to protect the charming but troubled superstar actor, Jack Stapleton. Jack, known for his Hollywood fame and striking looks, has been living in seclusion following a family tragedy. However, when his mother falls ill, he returns to the family ranch in Texas. There's a twist in this tale: Jack is hiding a dangerous secret—he has a relentless stalker. Desperate to shield his family from the truth, he persuades Hannah to pose as his girlfriend, a cover story that strains her better judgment. Even her skeptical ex doubts the credibility of their relationship. As Hannah and Jack navigate this high-stakes charade, a surprising connection begins to form between them. What was meant to be a professional arrangement turns into something much more real. But as the line between pretense and reality blurs, Hannah faces her toughest challenge yet: guarding her own long-neglected heart. "The Bodyguard" is a gripping and heartwarming story of unlikely love, trust, and the lengths one woman will go to protect the man she's hired to guard, while also shielding her own vulnerable heart from unforeseen emotional entanglements. 4. That Time I Kissed a Groomsman Grump by Julie Christianson In "That Time I Kissed The Groomsman Grump," clean fiction readers are treated to a delightful romantic comedy that prioritizes genuine connection and heartwarming moments over explicit content. This novel, part of the Time of Your Life series, introduces us to the charming and relatable characters, Brady and Natalie, who navigate the complexities of attraction, friendship, and family ties in a small-town setting. Brady Graham and Natalie Slater share a history as friends, but their growing attraction threatens to complicate their already interconnected lives. As the Maid of Honor and Best Man in their respective siblings' wedding, their paths become unavoidably entwined, and their chemistry sizzles with every encounter. Yet, the potential complications of their budding romance weigh heavily on their minds, especially with family dynamics at play. Natalie dreams of a future on the west coast while Brady is committed to his small-town responsibilities and secret ambitions. The tension between their desires and the promise they've made to their families forms the backdrop for their heartwarming and humorous journey. Readers of "That Time I Kissed The Groomsman Grump" can expect a captivating and entertaining story that explores the nuances of love and desire without delving into explicit scenes. Instead, the focus is on the humor, warmth, and relatable moments that make clean fiction such a delightful and enjoyable genre. In this clean romcom, love blossoms amidst family gatherings, and the spark between Brady and Natalie provides a satisfying and entertaining escape for readers seeking a clean and heartwarming love story. 5. The Flat Share by Beth O’Leary In Beth O'Leary's enchanting novel, "The Flatshare," readers are welcomed into a world where the power of connection transcends the boundaries of physical space and the importance of clean fiction shines brightly. Tiffy and Leon, two strangers facing life's challenges, embark on a unique arrangement that intertwines their lives and introduces them to the transformative magic of literature. Tiffy Moore, a quirky and endearing editorial assistant, finds herself in a dire housing situation. With limited resources and a need for a new place to live, she stumbles upon an unusual offer: sharing a one-bedroom flat with a stranger, Leon Twomey, a night-shift nurse. The catch? They'll never meet in person; instead, they'll share the same space at different times of the day. As Tiffy and Leon begin their unconventional cohabitation, the novel's emphasis on clean fiction becomes evident. Both passionate readers, they discover a shared love for literature, particularly classic novels and stories that transcend time. The flat's shelves gradually fill with an eclectic mix of clean fiction books, and the act of reading becomes a bridge that connects these two seemingly disparate souls. Beth O'Leary's novel is a delightful celebration of the connections we can form with others, even when physical proximity is not possible. It reminds us that clean fiction, with its timeless stories and universal themes, has the ability to transcend boundaries and bring people together, offering a safe and comforting refuge in a complex world. HISTORICAL FICTION: Lovely War by Julie Berry In the enchanting historical fiction novel "Lovely War" by Julie Berry, readers are transported into the tumultuous times of World War I and World War II, where the enduring themes of love, sacrifice, and the indomitable human spirit take center stage. This beautifully crafted narrative is an excellent choice for those seeking clean fiction that delves deep into the complexities of love and war while maintaining a focus on the power of the human heart. Set against the backdrop of 1917, the story introduces us to two couples whose lives become intertwined amidst the chaos of the Great War. Hazel, a talented but shy pianist, and James, a newly enlisted soldier with dreams of becoming an architect, share a profound and immediate love. However, their romance is cut short when James is sent to the brutal battlefields. On a parallel path, Aubrey Edwards, a gifted musician from the all-African-American 15th New York Infantry, is also bound for the front lines. Love is the furthest thing from his mind until he crosses paths with Colette Fournier, a Belgian chanteuse who has already endured unimaginable tragedy at the hands of the Germans. "Lovely War" weaves together the destinies of these four individuals, revealing their experiences, passions, and the sacrifices made during a time of global upheaval. Their stories are narrated by Aphrodite, the Greek goddess of love, in a luxurious Manhattan hotel room during World War II. Her quest to understand the age-old connection between Love and War unveils a multi-layered narrative rich in themes of prejudice, trauma, and the unifying power of music. In "Lovely War," readers will find a captivating historical fiction tale that celebrates the resilience of the human spirit and the enduring bonds of love amidst the trials of war. This novel offers a clean fiction experience that explores the depths of the heart while shedding light on the profound impact of historical events, all while emphasizing the timeless strength of love and the human capacity for compassion and connection. 2. A Very Large Expanse Of Sea By Tahereh Mafi In "A Very Large Expanse of Sea" by Tahereh Mafi, readers are invited into the life of Shirin, a teenage girl navigating the complex landscape of post-9/11 America. Shirin's world is defined by her Muslim identity, her love for breakdancing, and her choice to wear a hijab. However, it's also marked by the prejudice and ignorance she faces daily. Set in the early 2000s, shortly after the tragic events of September 11th, Shirin's life is far from typical. She's learned to build walls around herself as a defense mechanism against the bigotry she encounters. Her focus is on her passions, particularly breakdancing, where she finds solace and self-expression. When Ocean James, a charming and seemingly genuine boy, enters Shirin's life, she's initially skeptical of his intentions. She's grown used to people making assumptions about her based on her appearance and religion. But as she and Ocean connect through their shared love for music, they form a bond that transcends prejudice and societal expectations. "A Very Large Expanse of Sea" is a poignant and powerful coming-of-age story that emphasizes clean fiction values. It explores themes of love, identity, and resilience in the face of adversity, without relying on explicit content. Tahereh Mafi's storytelling shines as she delves into Shirin's journey, highlighting the importance of understanding, empathy, and the ability to see beyond stereotypes. Readers of clean fiction will appreciate this novel for its compelling narrative that navigates the challenges of adolescence and prejudice while delivering a message of hope and the enduring power of connection, making it a thought-provoking and accessible read for a wide range of audiences. 3. All The Light We Cannot See by Anthony Doerr "All the Light We Cannot See" by Anthony Doerr is a beautifully crafted novel that not only weaves together the lives of its two protagonists, Marie-Laure and Werner, during World War II but also exemplifies the concept of clean fiction. In a world filled with chaos and darkness, this novel shines as a beacon of literary purity. Clean fiction emphasizes the power of storytelling without relying on explicit content or gratuitous elements. Anthony Doerr's prose in this book is a testament to the notion that a well-told story can captivate readers without resorting to shock value or excessive graphic detail. Set against the backdrop of war, "All the Light We Cannot See" manages to convey the harsh realities of the time while maintaining a level of restraint that allows readers of all ages to engage with its narrative. It highlights the triumph of the human spirit in the face of adversity, the enduring power of kindness, and the profound connections that can be formed even in the darkest of times. This novel is a prime example of how clean fiction can be emotionally evocative, thought-provoking, and deeply moving without resorting to explicit content or graphic scenes. It underscores the idea that storytelling, when executed with skill and sensitivity, can leave a lasting impact on readers and transport them to different worlds while maintaining a sense of literary purity. "All the Light We Cannot See" serves as a reminder that sometimes, the most powerful stories are the ones that leave the most to the imagination, allowing readers to fill in the gaps with their own emotions and experiences. 4. The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Society by Mary Ann Shaefer and Annie Barrows "The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society" by Mary Ann Shaffer and Annie Barrows is a heartwarming novel that celebrates clean fiction, showcasing the power of storytelling in its purest form. Set in the aftermath of World War II, this novel introduces us to the charming island of Guernsey, which had endured the occupation by German forces. The story unfolds through letters exchanged between the protagonist, Juliet Ashton, a writer in search of her next subject, and the members of the eccentric Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society. As Juliet delves deeper into the lives and stories of the island's inhabitants, she discovers the resilience of the human spirit, the enduring bonds of friendship, and the healing power of literature. Clean fiction, as exemplified by this novel, emphasizes the art of storytelling without the need for explicit content or graphic themes. "The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society" beautifully illustrates that rich, evocative storytelling can engage readers on a profound level without resorting to sensationalism or unnecessary explicitness. In a world where literature can sometimes be overshadowed by shock value, this novel reminds us of the enduring charm of clean fiction. It captures the imagination and hearts of readers by immersing them in a captivating narrative while maintaining a sense of literary purity. Through the lens of the Guernsey Literary Society's letters, the book showcases the magic of words to heal wounds, forge connections, and illuminate the human experience, proving that storytelling can be both powerful and clean, leaving a lasting impact on readers of all ages. In conclusion, reading clean fiction can be a refreshing and uplifting experience, particularly for those who seek to avoid explicit content or heavy themes. Whether you enjoy romance, mystery, or historical fiction, there is a clean read out there for you. So go ahead, pick up a clean fiction book today and immerse yourself in a world of wholesome entertainment. Your mind and heart will thank you for it. Follow @sophsinclairwrites on instagram for more!
- NaPoWriMo Mini Issue Feature
The NaPoWriMo Mini Issue is special to us for numerous reasons. It’s the first time RTS has published a mini issue. Additionally, it is also our first issue with only poetry. We were absolutely overcome with joy upon seeing the several submissions that we received, that we decided to turn what was once supposed to be a feature, to a mini issue. And that is how the NaPoWriMo Mini Issue was born. In this feature, we would like to highlight the pieces published by giving you an insight into their behind-the-scenes. We asked our contributors what inspired them to write their poems, and how they hoped others would relate to it. We hope this helps you appreciate them more, and gives you some inspiration for your own writing! You can read the lovely poems themselves inside the mini issue. Secrets by Owl Category of Poem: Tanka More Information: A few days ago, Owl wrote some notes in her phone about being weighed down by family secrets and unable to grow up like a normal person. Thence came this poem. Her Chinese name means dawn, which inspired the line about her namesake. (Truth is, she's been waiting to use her name in her writing for a while.) Instagram: @owl_writes Bio: Owl is a writer born and raised in Hong Kong. When she is not reading or writing (or drowning in school work), she is either crocheting or getting bitten by her cat. One of her goals this year is to start writing poetry. Feedback from our Editors: I love the references to the ocean and ships. you don't know the fire by A. Wheeler Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: Instagram: @absleigh.wabsleigh.w Bio: A is renaissance person of sorts, holding a bachelors of science in neuroscience, having originated a role in a play called Prolog, and having been publicist, scientific consultant, and played Coroner Young in thepedersonproject.net short film. They also created, co-wrote, directed, co-edited, and starred in a podcast coming at the end of May called Carnivea: A Queer Gothic. They are passionate about queer storytelling and the horror genre, and more specifically the impact art can have on people. They want their art to touch people. Feedback from our Editors: I love the idea of reexamining our preconceived notions that is carried through this poem. The line about fire is my favorite. Whispers of Conquest by Leen Abdulfatah Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry Instagram: @le06.nle06.n Bio: Leen is a remarkable individual, adeptly juggling the demands of student life with their aspirations as a poet. Their innate talent for creative writing and passion for literature allow them to craft captivating stories and poignant poetry that deeply resonate with readers. A charismatic public speaker, Leen enchants audiences with their eloquence and literary prowess. Outside the realm of words, they find joy in music's harmonies, chess's strategic challenges, crocheting's meditative art, and the comforting world of Gilmore Girls. With a spirit as diverse as their interests, Leen continues to explore new horizons, enriching the literary landscape with their unique perspective. Feedback from our Editors: I love the idea of an empire and having no symbolic power not being equal to having power or control is interesting Sing Sweet Nightingale by Kate Abrielle McCormick Category of Poem: Line Countdown Poetry More Information: TW: perhaps violence? I don't think it needs trigger warnings but just in case. There are some injury suggestions (but metaphorically if that makes sense). None of the injuries are real. I recently moved away from a very toxic, narcissistic ex friend. We had been sharing a flat (apartment) together for 2 years and she love bombed me until I was so blinded to the problems it didn't come up until I was already locked into the rental agreement. I finally get to escape and these are my emotions from that. It is heavily influenced by my favorite symbol across literature, the nightingale which often represents the passage of time, freedom, and creativity. And in the case of Oscar Wilde: a tragic hero. I believe other people will relate to this because not only will people come to leave their own toxic friendships/relationships/workplaces etc. But they will also come to feel these feelings. The relief of finally being free is a beautiful feeling and it deserved to be shown and related to. For people to say, hey that is me! I am free! Or perhaps to read it and realize they maybe ought to be free of their situation. I think this is a good fit because it was written throughout April. Each part I wrote as I came to grasp the fact that I was leaving little texts to myself and it was not written all in one go. It truly was a piece written through time, throughout April. Instagram: @the_doctors_jenny_ Bio: Kate Abrielle McCormick is a Bachelor's student studying English with Creative Writing at Queen Mary University of London. Following the Summer, she will be pursuing a Master's degree in Creative Writing. Kate is from PA and some of her works can be found either on Amazon, or in select stores within the state. She enjoys reading, writing anything from poetry to screenplays, and catching up on any of Neil Gaiman's new work! Feedback from our Editors: The feeling of newfound freedom in this piece is powerful and uplifting. It has such a musical quality to it too. Envolée Angélique by W.E. Everhart Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This poem delves into themes of longing, loss, and seeking solace or redemption through spiritual or celestial imagery. I was inspired to do it when I was still out of my first ever serious relationship at that time. Because I changed so much during my relationship, I questioned myself, my beliefs, and my morals. I felt lost. I felt that I didn't belong in my own culture and society anymore. I lost who and what I was, so I wrote this poem. At that time, I struggled with my beliefs and religion. So if you take notice, this poem is like a piece written by two voices: one wants to believe and head to the divine, and one morons his loss and wants to get away from it. I hope people can relate is like a piece written by two voices: one wants to believe and head to the divine, and one morons his loss and wants to get away from it. I hope people can relate in a sense of being puzzled in and out of a belief society and culture you have been all your life. Bio: Everhart is a young writer who studied philosophy, history, religion, and all things scientific in order to better understand and appreciate the beauty of our world. Through writing, he is able to paint beautiful pictures with words by creating poems and melodies that capture that beauty. Feedback from our Editors: The celestial visuals are beautiful pitiful skies by Aiyanna D. Flores Instagram: @his_Yannabearhis_Yannabear Bio: Aiyanna is a published poet from Texas but currently located in California. They are passionate about writing and want to become an independent author. Alongside being a poet, Aiyanna is a writer for both TeenCoalition4Climate and The Empowerment Paper. Aiyanna is a published poet from Texas but currently located in California. They are passionate about writing and want to become an independent author. Alongside being a poet, Aiyanna is a writer for both TeenCoalition4Climate and The Empowerment Paper. Feedback from our Editors: The sadness that comes with a necessary goodbye. I like the mood that it creates. Retour a ta fleur (return to your flower)) by Simono Category of Poem: Freestyle Poetry More Information: It's a poem about a broken-hearted theater singer. She talks about how she sang songs about the one she loved, yet he left her for someone else. I believe my poem is a good fit because it kind of fits the 'tortured poets' theme. Instagram: @Out_of_time_yasmin Bio: Simono is an Egyptian writer who gets inspired by culture, music, and art. Feedback from our Editors: I love how the piece is written like it is speaking to someone. An Eulogy to Love by Arabella Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This poem is one of those pieces which I didn't decide in advance I'd be writing. It just started with a bunch of scribbled lines, a messy and emotional rant of sorts in the middle of the night. It's about how much love can hurt if the circumstances around you do not allow you to pursue that love. It makes things hard, makes you feel like a criminal of sorts and drives you to an edge. It's the kind of pain where it's strong enough to make you feel helpless and yet it leaves you with the hope of being with this person despite all the odds, and you both agree to it. I titled it "A Eulogy to Love" because it's a sort of goodbye, a Eulogy to the love that you went through while being sort of stabbed by the thorns, be it pressure from your surroundings, or people looking down upon you, basically everything that happens in a conservative society. I think this poem is a good fit for the feature because it is a raw expression of my feelings and what I believe many people go through. I truly hope that there's other people who can understand my words and relate to them. Instagram: @arabella_1003 Bio: Arabella is the pen name of the writer. She loves writing poetry as it is one of the few activities that give her the freedom of expression and individuality; something that is restricted to her due to various circumstances. It's not only an escape, but something she believes is a part of her being. Feedback from our Editors: The imagery and metaphors in this poem are really beautiful. I love what is said in the last stanza, that wants to ignore the wrong in favor of feeling good. copy paste by Mary Antonette Riotocc Category of Poem: Prose Poetry Instagram: @worksby_toniriotoc Bio: Mary Antonette Riotoc is a Filipino writer with the phrase, “This girl can.” She embraces language and its message: be human. Excerpts of her work are on Instagram @worksby_toniriotoc. She strives for change through poetry and won the Ink Bowl Master Award in Ink Bowl Publishing's Winter Competition. Feedback from our Editors: The fact that the history makes the attraction and romance different is sweet and a powerful statement Beating Art by Maryam Majid Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: I wrote this poem in NaPoWriMo because I was thinking a lot about what poetry means to me during this month. It was inspired partially by a prompt for submission by @threadlitmag in the previous month titled "life as a creative". My submissions to this magazine were unsuccessful for this but I did read lots of poetry on the way we interact with our art. Also, as The Tortured Poets Department came out in April, the themes of turning our feelings into art also inspired me. Ultimately this poem explores how we can turn our pain into art and what that means for the people who read it in the future. Is the legacy of our ink only the pain swirled into it? What becomes of our pain once we imbue our poems with it - do we still feel it? I hope it is a concept that relates to many people in their poetry and art, and might find a home on this feature : ) Instagram: @maryammajick Bio: Maryam Majid is a young writer who loves writing poetry and prose that feels like the lavender haze in her veins. Her work has been published in Last Leaves Magazine, Teen Ink Magazine, the Cathartic Youth Literary Magazine, the Malu Zine, the Expressionist Literary Magazine, and the Encephalon Journal. She also volunteers as a reader for the Expressionist and a prose editor for the Malu Zine. She hopes to continue honing her craft and be a published author one day. Feedback from our Editors: Love the play on words in the title. This poem's take on pain becoming art is very interesting. The Gift Of a Wilted Rose by frey Category of Poem: Freestyle Poetry More Information: It was inspired by a past relationship within one of the two novels I’m writing now, although it will not be included in the novel nor will it be directly attached to it in any way — almost like a cut section or fan fiction. The main character in said book is Scarlet Tobin, a teenage girl who found herself waiting around for a boy to appreciate her and came to realise even after the fact that she was still somewhat attached to him. Instagram: @freydelrey.x Bio: An aspiring author currently writing two novels alongside bits of poetry!🤍 Feedback from our Editors: The agony and mistreatment is portrayed well, connecting both as ways of ‘romance’. Redemption by Ana Novik Instagram: @coffeecookiebook Bio: A writer from Switzerland who tries to put all that cannot be explained into words. Feedback from our Editors: I love the way the poem can be broken down into couplets that each carry a piece of the message. Melodies of Yesterday's by Aakansha Jagga Category of Poem: Nostalgia Instagram: @aakanshajagga14 Bio: Aakansha Jagga is an environmental and tech enthusiast and is into sustainable development and renewable energy. As a high school student from India, she actively engages in initiatives aimed at addressing global challenges, particularly the energy crisis. With a keen interest in environmental conservation and social impact, Aakansha strives to make a positive difference in the world through her advocacy and activism. Feedback from our Editors: The idea that the joy is in the past like it was an entirely different world, growing more vague has great detail. Torture Does Not Always Mean Hurt and Haunt by Chukwuma Henry Instagram: @dancingpen_arts Bio: Chukwuma Henry is a Nigerian pharmacist and budding poet. He likes to explore the themes of social justice and universal health coverage Chukwuma Henry is a Nigerian pharmacist and budding poet. He likes to explore the themes of social justice and universal health coverage Feedback from our Editors: This poem feels almost like a short story which is very cool. Its use of language is very poetic. i hate rainy days by Chloe D. Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This is based on a fictional character I'm writing and really helped me to get a sense of them. Instagram: @readlovewrite47 Bio: Chloe lives in New England, in her neck of the woods, and spends too much of her time reading and writing. She enjoys hiking and listening to underrated music. Visit her on Instagram @readlovewrite47 Feedback from our Editors: I love how the subject of the poem reveals itself as you get deeper into the poem. Things are rarely what people say they are. after i rub out the candle on my forearm instead of blowing the weak flame out by A. Deshmanee Instagram: @aar.deshmaar.deshm Bio: A. Deshmane is a queer poet from scorching Arizona. Their other work has been published by or is forthcoming in Stone of Madness Press, en*gendered lit, Catheartic Magazine, and Corporeal lit. In their spare time, they can be found wandering the desert on local hikes or wishing they owned a cat. Find them @aar.deshm on Instagram. Feedback from our Editors: I love the glorification of feelings and moments. The Smoke is Upon Us by Isabel Grace More Information: This poem was inspired by my curiosity about the impermanence of life and nature. I have attempted to set up an atmosphere that is rich in both, and then imagine how quickly it could be burned away. I think the poem is a good fit for this issue as it incorporates themes that are common in a lot of poetry (life, death, nature, loss, etc.) and may resonate with other young people who have questions about the wonder and purpose of life. Instagram: @isabel_.grace Bio: Isabel is a teenage writer, musician and art enthusiast looking to explore worldwide creative communities and find a meaningful space for her work. Feedback from our Editors: The urgency that is established in just the first line is so fun. Also love the contrast between nature and violence/death. suspended in air by Shu J. Li Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry Instagram: @wlvshuu Bio: Shu J. Liu (they/them) is a teen writer from Canada who loves poetic storytelling, dystopia, and science fiction. When they're not writing, they can be found doodling eyes, listening to music, or watching video essays. Their work has appeared in multiple literary magazines, such as Rewrite the Stars Review, Bottled Dreams Literary Magazine, and Mosaic Lit Journal. They're on Instagram @wlvshuu. Feedback from our Editors: I love the action told and desperation in it. He is not her’s anymore by Riddha Ritajna Bharali Category of Poem: Prose Poetry More Information: Insecurity of losing your loved ones Instagram: @jstt_ridd Bio: A teenager who loves to write poems Feedback from our Editors: The mourning of a relationship combined with the confusion of what they still are is interesting. Why Must I Change The World Already? by Heetal Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: As a rising high school senior, college admissions is all that's on everyone's mind. Is my SAT score good enough? Are my grades top-tier? Do I have great activities that will impress colleges? This poem was born out my frustration and hopelessness, as I try to compete with millions of other students around the nation for a spot in universities. I don't feel like I have anything to offer to colleges, nothing special that would make them pick me. So, my poem questions this need to do something special, do something big, in order to get into a top-tier university. What about the people who haven't done something big yet, like me? What do we do, when others' applications blow us out of the water? I think other people might relate to this because my experience with college admissions isn't unique, by a long shot. There are millions of students struggling to impress admissions officers all around the world. College admissions is a long, frustrating process, and I hope that other teens going through it can find solace in the fact that they're not alone in how they're feeling - that there are others who are struggling too, others who are not nationally-recognized athletes or child geniuses or inventors of a revolutionary vaccine or whatever, who are feeling the exact same way. And I hope that people reading this can also remember that even if they don't make it into the best colleges, they will never be not good enough. Instagram: @heetalofalltrades Bio: Heetal is an artist, musician, and creative writer who lives in Texas, USA. When she's not in school, doing homework, playing her flute, making art, or writing, she usually reads books, bakes, or spends time with her friends. She also has a passion for science, especially chemistry, astronomy, and psychology. In her creative works, she enjoys expressing the ups and downs of being a teenager in today's world. Feedback from our Editors: The subject matter is so relatable for teens! The panic that comes with being young but feeling the need to be and have done more. Flowers wrapped all around by Ellen Alfredson Category of Poem: Prose Poetry More Information: This poem is about the process of coming out, about the fear of judgment and the doubt that comes with it. It’s about homophobia and acceptance of yourself. I think about any queer person can relate to this on some level. It’s really deeply personal to me, but I’m sharing it because I think it’s important and so real. Instagram: @elle.alfredson Bio: Ellen Alfredson is a fifteen year old writer from Sweden who writes poetry and fiction. She is currently working on a book. She believes that writing is her passion, and Virginia Woolf is one of her big inspirations. She is just starting to get her work out into the world and is published in two issues of Rewrite The Stars Review, but also in The Fig Tree, The Malu Zine and more. Feedback from our Editors: The profoundness and intensity of this piece is great, especially when you compare the words with the flowers. Scars on my skin by Solandis Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: I wrote this poem, when someone toxic was a major part of my life and I would do anything to keep the person with me as I was too scared to be lonely. After I finally let the person go, I wrote this poem thinking about my past. As I mentioned before, when I can't let something of my mind, I write about it. This poem is also a part of my history and the pain. It talks about love, pain, and sacrifice. It's about people willing to do anything for love, even hurting themselves. Teenagers like me, can relate because we often feel intense emotions and sometimes do things we wouldn't normally do and shouldn't do all in the name of love.The poem shows how love can make people feel like tearing themselves apart for others but also how we want to rebuild themselves to be loved. It talks about scars from love and how they can be seen as beautiful. Teens might relate because they've felt the pain of love and the desire to be loved deeply. Instagram: @delicatelydarkly Bio: Solandis, a 17-year-old poetess hailing from India, has been weaving words into verse since the tender age of 13. For her, poetry serves as both an escape and a mode of expression; when words fail, her pen unfailingly articulates the unsaid. As Virginia Woolf once mused, "Lock up your libraries if you like; but there is no gate, no lock, no bolt that you can set upon the freedom of my mind." With each stanza penned, Solandis unlocks the gates of her imagination, inviting readers to explore the realms of her poetic prowess. Feedback from our Editors: The strength in this narrator's devotion, however harmful it may be to them, makes this poem very compelling. The sentiment behind it is very relatable to people in toxic relationships. moment of memory by Bethany H. Watson Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This poem was inspired by the Escapril prompt "childhood memory." It's about a rather mundane but concrete memory I have from my childhood. While the poem includes the specific details I remember of it, I think it's the general feeling of childhood freedom, joy, and safety instilled in those details that are why it's stuck with me all these years. I think others will be able to relate to this feeling of intense nostalgia instilled by a partial memory. Instagram: @sparrowhawke_writes Bio: Bethany H. Watson is a young writer and poet from Southern California. She draws poetic inspiration from song lyrics, classical mythology, and the yearning infused in a warm breeze. You can follow her on Instagram at @sparrowhawke_writes and find more of her poetry and musings on life at surfacingpurpose.substack.com. Feedback from our Editors: I love the relevation being made of the memory. thoughts of a daughter by Ray Shubert Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: It was inspired by a past relationship within one of the two novels I’m writing now, although it will not be included in the novel nor will it be directly attached to it in any way — almost like a cut section or fan fiction. The main character in said book is Scarlet Tobin, a teenage girl who found herself waiting around for a boy to appreciate her and came to realise even after the fact that she was still somewhat attached to him. Instagram: @down_the._.rabbit_hole Bio: Ray Shubert is a teen writer from Utah. She is very inspired by gothic literature and loves nothing more than writing and a good book. Feedback from our Editors: It's a really lovely tribute to/examination of mother-daughter relationships. Spiral by Callisto Arabell Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This poem was inspired by the prompt “spiral” and is based on a women who is facing depression but is still hung over her breakup Instagram: @callisto_arabell Bio: Callisto Arabell is a sixteen year old poet and writer. She started writing poetry from the age of 12 and started writing from a very young age. Callisto is also very passionate about music and reading. Feedback from our Editors: I love the slight bitterness that comes through at the end, the narrator has other things to worry about but can't help but be overtaken by the subject. More by B. McKenzie Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: I was inspired to write this poem at 4AM during finals week. I was burnt out from so many different creative projects and struggling with insomnia. I decided to journal my feelings of creative frustration and turned it into a poem. Instagram: @bmckenziewrites @bmckenziephoto Bio: B. Mckenzie is a writer, photographer, and autism advocate. When she is not writing scripts and poems or taking photos, she enjoys cosplay, drawing, and petting her pet cat Ivy. She is currently working towards a bachelor's degree in Digital Media and Film Studies. Feedback from our Editors: A powerful message in such few lines and the repeating is a nice touch. Spiral by Callisto Arabell Category of Poem: Free Verse Poetry More Information: This poem was inspired by the prompt “spiral” and is based on a women who is facing depression but is still hung over her breakup Instagram: @callisto_arabell Bio: Callisto Arabell is a sixteen year old poet and writer. She started writing poetry from the age of 12 and started writing from a very young age. Callisto is also very passionate about music and reading. Feedback from our Editors: I love the slight bitterness that comes through at the end, the narrator has other things to worry about but can't help but be overtaken by the subject. the necklace by Sasi Kondru Category of Poem: Rhyming Couplet More Information: This poem is about a necklace that has now worn out and is no longer used. I feel like lots of people take lots of things for granted (like necklaces) instead of looking at their memories, and they easily replace these objects even if they have some sentimental value. What inspired me to write is was when I was helping clean my house for a party and lots of things with value to me that I had memories with were being thrown out. I believe it's a good fit because it's a recent piece based on a recent event! Thank you so much for considering it! Instagram: @aid4need_4 Bio: Sasi is a junior who loves to write short stories and even shorter poems! She aims to write about her current feelings and general life! She has been published in several magazines, including Evanescent Magazine, Petrichor Gazette, and Catheartice Magazine! In her free time, she likes to take long walks and play video games! Feedback from our Editors: The line ‘what used to gather memories now gathers dust’ is beautiful. The night sky is a library by Kaidence Moss Instagram: @draculalax Bio: Kaidence Moss is a young poet who loves fairytales and mythology. Feedback from our Editors: Simple but sweet! It creates some lovely visuals and is a love letter to poetry. 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- Introduction to Screenwriting
Have you ever wanted to act out a story but you just can’t seem to get them to understand the idea behind it? Fear not, you have a tool at your disposal in these situations, the art of screenwriting. Screenwriting is a tool that allows you to convey your ideas and put them on paper in a format that can provide major details in regards to the production of a film or video, such as camera angles or an actor’s expression whilst speaking a line. It can easily get an idea across to everyone effectively. What is Screenwriting? Screenwriting is the art of turning stories into screenplays, also known as movie scripts. A screenplay is a document that consists of acting and scene directions that are the blueprints for a movie. Before diving into the specificity of a screenplay, let’s take a look at the basics of screenplay writing. What is standard screenplay formatting? Here are some of the basics that should be incorporated into your screenplays: 12-point Courier font size 1.5 inch margin on the left of the page 1 inch margin on the right, top, and bottom of the page Each page should have approximately 55 lines The dialogue block starts 2.5 inches from the left side of the page Character names must have uppercase letters and be positioned starting 3.7 inches from the left side of the page Page numbers are positioned in the top right corner with a 0.5 inch margin from the top of the page. The first page shall not be numbered, and each number is followed by a period. Now let’s dive deeper into the structure of a screenplay. Many screenplays begin with a transition, one of the most popular ways to start a screenplay is with a transition word like FADE IN. Scene Headings and Subheadings The scene heading is there to help break up the space the scene takes place in and give the reader and production team an idea of the story’s geography in relation to a scene. You will use the abbreviation INT. for interior spaces and EXT. for exterior spaces. Then add a little description of the setting, and then the time of day to complete the heading. Here is an example: INT. OF Crystal’S DORM ROOM - UofC CAMPUS - DAY Notice how the heading is mostly all capitalized except for the name of the university. This is so that the reader can distinguish that it was meant as University Of Cameroon rather than UOFC. Also make note of the hyphens used to separate the individual pieces of information, such as where it separates the specific setting from the general location and the time of the place. Should a scene involve the setting being moved from inside to outside or vice versa, you can use INT/EXT. or EXT/INT. But more generally, a subheading will be used to indicate that the setting had changed within the scene. Here is an example of the use of a subheading. The example shown is a snippet of a script: FADE IN: 2 INT. OF HIGH SCHOOL - MORNING 2 WE OPEN at a high school in a city. The front gates of the school are filled with students entering the school. We glide into the school through the front gates and stop in front of guy. JAKE (17), A cheerful and humorous soul. He’s a normal high school student with a little above average grades. Dressed with a blue tee and chino pants with a black leather belt. He wears a Black Nike backpack. HALLWAY He walks through the hallway towards his next class, Calculus, when he bumps into Virginia, one of his best friends. Take note on how the alignment on the heading and subheading is the same. Also, the number next to the heading is typically used to show how many characters are in a scene. Transitions The bottom right of the page is used for transitions. The use of transitions have been used less in modern screenplays, typically only seeing them at the beginning and end of a script. The most popular transition words are CUT TO: and FADE OUT. Here is an example of how transitions are used: FADE IN: 2 INT. OF HIGH SCHOOL - MORNING 2 Jake begins to COPY the answers down onto his own paper. Shortly after, a loud DING sounded at the beginning of the class period. Jake then RETURNS the paper to its rightful owner. VIRGINIA If you need my help again, don’t Be afraid to ask me. I am smarter than you after all. JAKE True. FADE OUT. This also showcases how one could begin and end a screenplay with using FADE IN: and FADE OUT. Character Introductions When you introduce a character in a screenplay, you want to use all capital letters for the name of the character, then their age in parenthesis, and finally some information about their personality traits. An example would be: JAKE (17), A cheerful and humorous soul. He’s a normal high school student with above average grades. Dressed with a blue tee and chino pants with a black leather belt. He wears a Black Nike backpack. Actions And Dialogue Action lines are where you describe the visual and audible actions that take place on screen. You want to write in the third person in the present tense. You can make your script a better read by eliminating redundant pronouns and conjunctions. Big noises and important objects can be written out in all caps to emphasize their effect on the story. Here is an example of an action line being used: Virginia took off her BOOKBAG and placed it on the ground. She then unzipped the biggest pocket and proceeded to take out a sheet of paper. She then holds it out in front of Jake. Here is an example of a big noise being used: Jake begins to COPY the answers down onto his own paper. Shortly after, a loud DING sounded at the beginning of the class period. Jake then RETURNS the paper to its rightful owner. Dialogues follow special formatting to make it stand out in a script. This is so that voice actors and actresses can see their lines more easily. Here is an example of a dialogue. VIRGINIA If you need my help again, don’t Be afraid to ask me. I am smarter than you after all. JAKE True. Extensions and Parentheticals Extensions happen when a character says something off-screen (O.S.), or if dialogue is a voice-over (V.O.). You will see extensions when a character ends a block of dialogue, performs an action, and speaks more. An example of extension placement is right next to a character’s name in a dialogue block. Parentheticals follow the same formatting and are also inside the dialogue. Parentheticals show small actions, or even a change in mood without having to jump out to an action line. An example would go like this: VIRGINIA (V.O) WE should hang out afterschool! We can netflix and chill at my place. Screenwriting Samples Now that you’ve gotten a lot of the fundamentals of writing screenplays. Here is a Sample Script for you to reference and see how each element is utilized in a script.
- Issue VII: Arcane Arcades Feature
Issue VII: Arcane Arcades was a one-of-a-kind issue for RTS focused around games and entertainment. We were absolutely floored by the submissions we received, and it was incredibly difficult for us to choose our contributors. Ultimately, we chose the pieces that best fit the theme and the kind of work we published. Today, we'd like to further highlight the pieces published by giving you an insight into their behind-the-scenes. We asked our contributors what inspired them to write their pieces, and how they hoped others would relate to it. We hope this helps you appreciate the pieces more, and gives you some inspiration for your own writing! You can read the lovely pieces themselves inside Issue VII. Note: Their social media handles are also listed in brackets if you want to support them. Poetry Prose Creative Non-fiction POETRY Christopher Arkwright - Pokémon is my faith in humanity I was sitting in the car, on a long road trip, thinking about power. Everyone wants the power to have people bow down before them, build great monuments in their name, be truly special. But in dictators and rulers alike, the truly unreachable, magical power, has always been the greatest allure. The power to fly, breathe fire or use magical weapons in combat. That led me to the realisation that in fact, most people do enjoy those dreams of power. But it isn’t they who have it, it’s Pokémon! In Pokémon, you are still a weak and feeble human, yet so many are obsessed with the magical power of the creatures they can tame. For me, this was nice thought, a realisation which (at least for that afternoon) restored my faith in humanity. I wanted to share that feeling with other people, so I wrote it down. Devon Webb - NPC (@devonwebbnz (Instagram, Twitter, TikTok, Bluesky)) 'NPC' is about a lack of autonomy & effective communication in romantic attractions, using an NPC (non-playable character) metaphor to portray the idea of being reduced to a repetitive insignificance in somebody else's story, even when you view yourself as a protagonist. E. S. Merritt - Game of Hearts (@e.s.merritt) My piece is inspired by the game of romance that people play when in a relationship. This poem was inspired by a situation I went through, where one person in a relationship is looking for something fun and flirty, while the other is looking for something more serious. Teens will relate to this, as the teenage years are when people experience their first love and heartbreak, and many teens have probably been in a relationship like this. E.J.M - The Game of Being A Teenage Girl (@ella_writesbooks_) My piece is about the teenage girl experience and how it compares to a game such as Tetris. Tetris is a game that mathematically, you can't win. It will keep going forever and ever. This is similar to the average teenage girl experience because no matter how hard you try to change yourself to seek the approval of others, there will always be someone who hates on you and you can't please them. What inspired me to write this poem is the game of Tetris. You can never become the winner of it since it's a never ending game much like trying to please people as a teenage girl. Other people can relate to this because many individuals (especially teenage girls) have felt pressure or the yearning feeling to change themselves in order for people to like them more. Many individuals can understand how it feels to rearrange yourself to be 'perfect' and have people still not think that it's enough. This poem would be a good fit for your magazine because it's a teen magazine and unfortunately, it is common for many teenagers go through the experiences mentioned in the poem. Hopefully, when people read my poem, they will finally know/understand that it's okay to be yourself because there will be people who like you and they shouldn't change themselves because that will only lead to their own unhappiness. Ellen Alfredson - I am no expert at chess (_ellen.alfredson) In ”I am no expert at chess” the ”Chess game” is compared to life, or rather life in the social world. It’s about norms and how it’s all a game with rules you have to follow about how you act, communicate, look, and your sexuality etc. The chess game is a metaphor for social life as the base of the entire poem. It’s about struggling to fit into heteronormative society and more. It relates to the theme of ”games” because the chess game is the metaphor that is the base of the whole poem. The title, ”I am no expert at chess” means exactly what it sounds like. Struggling with playing the part right and living up to people’s, or maybe one’s own expectations. I think many people can relate to feeling this pressure around other people. A fun detail is that chess is usually black and white, just like the straight ”flag”, which connects back to the title, ”I am no expert at chess.” Ila S - Open Settings? (@ila.writes7) I was inspired by the description of the theme "Games" for this issue, really. The idea of "moments [I'd] never get back again" struck my heart, as gaming is something that I've slowly given up on over the years. I got back into gaming with "The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom" and Minecraft this summer, and it felt like meeting an old friend again. When I heard the theme, I also thought of a song from an artist I listen to, Madilyn Mei. She wrote a song called "Have I Outgrown Minecraft?", and that song greatly inspired "Blocky Heart". Overall, games hold a place close to my heart and childhood, and it was enjoyable to think about this theme in terms of poetry. I feel as though other people have also given up on things they enjoy over the years, and I hope that this issue might have them considering going back and enjoying old hobbies, too. "Open Settings?" is meant to be a poem based on the escapism aspect of gaming. It's about not having to worry about the real world or real-life issues when you game, and how bitter it can be when you have to move on or focus on real life again. The second poem, "Nintendo Switch Controllers" is about how gaming is one of the ways I connect and bond with my dad. The first poem, "Blocky Heart", is based on Minecraft. As a kid, I would play it during the summer on my old PS4. I had nothing else to do and nobody to really talk to, so I just made a few pet dogs for myself and pretended I was somewhere else. M.S. Blues - where a kid can be a kid (@m.s.blues_) This piece corresponds with the theme of "games" because it discusses how games at ChuckECheese evoke past memories in me - and what that signifies in my life. I recently did a presentation on youth and perserving childhood memories. Later on that day, I was considering my own memories and that's what sparked my idea. I know people will relate to this piece because it'll make them revisit their own memories and perhaps reflect on how that has shaped them into who they are today. MG - Doll House (@melifluousgelatoo.writes) Doll House is a poem I wrote after the inspirations strike me when I saw one of my friends talk about the play pretend games that little kids used to play. However, the idea has existed for quite some time. I love observing humans, the world, and the system. And through it I notice things that not many talks about, like how we are all not so different from puppets on a string. Some of us may think we're the ones holding the string like we used to with dolls when we were young, but it doesn't matter if we're a commoner or royalty, a worker or a boss, a student or a teacher, a parent or a child, we are all bound by strings that force us to move. Often in the direction we didn't want. I've seen many people miserable because of it, more so because we didn't know these strings exist and who's pulling it. How many of our thoughts are our own? How many of our actions are our own? We may think all of it, but in reality it is very little if not none. A lot of our miseries in life are a carefully planned one. Those set in stone long before we're even born, invisible to most to ensure nobody mess with it when we do have the power to, if only we know. To many of us, the one pulling the strings are another human being. A guardian, a boss, or those we haven't even met before, those sitting at the top of the societal system. To many of us, the one pulling the strings aren't even tangible things. Greed, love, hate, insecurity, envy. These things grow stronger the more we deny or ignore its existence. We can't beat an enemy we don't even know exist, can we? So sit, take a deep breath, and see who's pulling your strings and where exactly were you bound with it. Only then can you cut it, in a way that hurts you the least. Miguel Barrios - After Tag (@Mmiguelbarrios (Instagram), miguelcbarrios (X)) My piece describes a unique relationship to games that kids of my age can likely remember. That being the transition of relying only on the outside for games and playtime to beginning to mix in games from smart phones and tablets. We were around during the inception of games like Minecraft and Roblox and are the first to have had their childhoods filled with the opportunity play them. I find that very interesting. I was never a kid who played sports. The ability never came naturally to me, and sometimes that was a bit annoying for me. But my cousins and I always had fan playing in the backyard of my Tias house, and then the time would come where we would move to Minecraft or Roblox. I think many people who were children during the same time as me can relate to how excited they were when their parents finally let them get Minecraft or Roblox and how much fun they had building whatever they wanted with their friends and family. I think that Rewrite the Stars, as a publication for young writers like myself, is the perfect place for this piece as our childhoods are the most unfamiliar of any generation yet. All generations before us were more similar than ours. This poem reflects the distinct nature of our childhoods and our stories. Nabiha - Nostalgic Nights (@echoes.inink) It shows how that game is an important memory and how it created a bond among a few people. People can relate to this since during covid when this game was pretty popular, people spent hours with their friends on it and then everyone got busy so they drifted apart and those nights just became memories. This used to be my favourite game and hence I decided to write about it. Also it can be a good fit for the magazine since i think it’s relatable. Nitika Sathiya - Rummy (@nitika._.s) Rummy is about how I played Rummy with my grandparents, which brought us closer together. I was inspired to write Rummy because of the familial connection aspect. I love reflecting on my relationships with my loved ones through poetry. Phoebe B.H Mercury - Monopoly (@spitewantsmealive) It is an allegorical poem that dives into the theme of moving forward in life, by making connections to the game Monopoly. Just like how the pawns are forced to move forward, so are we and even if we are met with failure at some point, we can always start over. This poem may bring hope to the people who are often feeling down because of the failures that life may bring from time to time. Robin Pearson - Snakes and Adders (@rob1n_pearson) This poem explores wordplay with games, but also how life is sometimes confusing, with too many rules in a complicated format. It looks at the difficultly some people have playing as a larger metaphor for making no progress compared to others and how the narrator always seems to ‘lose’.I think it’s insight into human interpretation - how people might read the same set of ‘rules’ yet draw completely different outcomes. My poem is a light dig into the frustration of losing, but also how convoluted and difficult playing the game of life can be. This piece was inspired by my own experiences as a neurodiverse individual, and the difficulties I sometimes face comprehending all the rules of convention. This piece is special to me as it explores frustration with failing to advance whilst others seem to thrive, but simultaneously the fascination with ‘why people do what they do.’ I hope others can relate to the struggle of fitting in, and that they are not alone in feeling left behind. W. E. Everhart - Digital Odyssey: A Gaming Journey (@w.e._everhart_290) The poem, as I see it, incorporates not only the meaning of gaming, the start of it, and what gaming is basically, but it is also an image through humanity as a species. Gaming has always been apart of humanity. It helps us imagine a world out there where dreams, hopes, and imagination rule. A world where the struggle of good and bad is but a map ahead waiting to be discovered. A child can overcome his fears in that world, and an adult can learn to adapt to the ever-changing world. This piece, as I would like to say, shares the experience I shared with every human from the dawn of humanity till this day, from all the way when we used to play with sticks and rocks. Gaming is not just a hobby; it is a way for us humans to state to the world, “I am here, I can accept you, and I have lived for thousands of lives to understand, accept, and coexist with you.” No matter how dull and lonely the world gets, gaming shows us that the simplest of things can help us and change us. As humans, dreams are nothing but caged reality waiting to be untied. Freed from this cage, we call out imagination, and what gaming does is open that cage so this reality and ours can coexist, exchange information, and learn from one another. For my inspiration to make this peace, it wasn’t anything. Wow, really. I have always grown fond of adventures and stories, and gaming really helped me with this. Imagine watching a movie that finishes with a conclusion, but for you, it is not enough. There were actions and changes you wanted to make, and bam, you suddenly can do it all in that small room you rest in. I was inspired, to be honest, by music and my maladaptive daydream. I hope that not just teens but kids and adults will be able to relate to the experience of gaming and see how important it is. I would say that as humans, we always had that shared experience, and that shared experience can be seen clearly in gaming. Z. Hutchings - Survive -- Stay Alive, Winner Takes All, The beauty of a game (@zaida.hutchings) I am submitting three pieces. The first two are directly inspired by videogames and the last one is inspired by card games. When people feel lost, a game is a great way to find yourself. If you aren't careful, it is also a way to lose yourself. Life is a balance, and it is about finding a way to keep yourself safe and alive. I hope people can resonate with my pieces and find comfort in them. We are in this game together. The most memorable games in my life were adventure games that took the reader on a journey, such as Skyrim and Undertale. They were about strength-- both mentally and physically. It was this feeling I wanted to put into my piece. It isn’t always a black and white story, and sometimes life is hard. Sometimes people leave scarred and bruised, and the only thing left to do is survive. Survive mental health, unsafe living conditions, or just survive the ever changing world we live in. PROSE Adia Reynolds - 8-bit Arachnid (@cryptic.cryptid.writes) Aside from the emotional themes of the story, it also centers around the game Minecraft and primarily one of the mobs in the game - the spider. The opening line is a quote I said to a friend during a conversation about Minecraft. She stated how much she hated fighting the monsters and I regaled how I used to try to keep them as pets even if they aggro'd to me and tried to kill me. It is a story about youthful insecurity and self-perception as well as an unabashed love for one's interests. Alice - Game Over (@aliceswips on Instagram and TikTok) The core question behind this piece is: how does a person who organises everything in detail react to unforeseen events? I had the idea after watching videos of people who structured their lives (tasks, school assignments, etc.) like missions in videogames. I liked the concept straight away, but I realised that this, along with strict timetables in general, doesn't really leave any room for unexpected events. So, what happens when someone's life is organized as a videogame? Ander Miftari - Blind Man's Buff (@anteetum) I couldn't think of anything good that mapped onto a specific game, so I went a little more abstract and wrote something about the power games people play between eachother as children (well, their whole lives, really. But children in this case) and was able to tie that back conceptually to the prompt. I don't know how rigidly we had to stick to the theme. This piece in particular was inspired by a guy I actually knew growing up. He was into almost exactly the same kind of weird power games featured in the story and was in fact worse than the relatively toned-down character of Junior (he claimed to have a brother in the Hell's Angels who sold drugs and would often say he could have us beaten up for snitching on him, stupid in hindsight but terrifying to children who don't know any better). He was not the only one, but the memory of interacting with him in particular as a young child of about 11 or 12 was what inspired this examination of just how awful children really can be to each other, given the right prodding. I honestly don't know how much people will enjoy it, although I can say for certain that you definitely should avoid it if you are sensitive to children being harmed and bullying in general. Arianna Kanji - Inhumanity 101 (@ari.kanji) This story does not follow the strict conventions of grammar and story. It is, in essence, a piece of prose written by a poet, or perhaps a poem written by somebody who has very little idea what they are doing. It combines perspectives and points of view, repeats words for nothing other than emphasis, switches between distaste for a ruined society and a plea to be accepted in the way that others so easily are. It has no backbone other than the wayward thoughts of an eight year old child sitting in a pink bed with a fluffy pen and a makeshift point system, and it has no logic to it other than the fourteen year old child sitting in that same bed, with that same pen and that same point system, struggling to understand what game they’re supposed to be playing. It took the concept of games and twisted it inside out, dumped it on its head, ripped apart every thread and wore it as a hat instead. But then again, for somebody writing about the experience of being just a little bit stranger than their peers, that behavior fits pretty well. This piece would be a good fit for your magazine because it is the unfiltered, experimental thoughts of a person who’s still scared of raising their hand in class. And after all, haven’t all writers been rather crudely told that their dreams are nothing but fantasies in the cruel game that is life, and spent the rest of their years wondering who decided to write such unfair rules? Zara Pearce - The Game of Life (@shes_zarapearce) A fun twist on the board game; The game of life. I was inspired to write this because I thought it could be fun to experiment with how some people treat games like they're real life. CREATIVE NON-FICTION Georgia Hope - 51 Standard (Minus an Ace) (@georgia_02132) My essay discusses how card games allowed me to be more present and involved with my friends, while improving my mental health at times when I find school to be overwhelming. (ie the use of games as an escape and coping mechanism.) I think the issue of student burnout is something that's almost universally experienced in all levels of academia. I would imagine that many readers of this magazine are likely in high school, about to make this transition to university, or are currently attending it. I've found that games have turned into one of the many tools I used to relieve stress and construct some method of school/life balance which might help readers find a similar approach that works for them. Follow @rewritethestarsreview on Instagram for more information about upcoming issues.
- Unrealistic Expectations : The Reality of Being a Teen Writer
by Milica Filipovic In the last few years, teen writers from all over the globe have joined together to celebrate their love for their work. We’ve created a community across multiple social media platforms where young writers can bond over their mutual passion. However, with the rise of this new friendship, writers have begun to share their harsh experiences with battling the expectations set for their work. Whether through their own consciousness or the words of more experienced adults, it is clear that pressure has been placed on our backs to churn out work that aligns with society’s standards. As we begin to delve further into our skills and develop writing styles, it is evident that each person’s abilities are unique to its own strengths and weaknesses. These differences are what make our writing enjoyable and makes it stand out. As of late, the idea of fancy and elegant prose has been credited as a superior form of writing. While each type has its own faults, we have placed one on a pedestal and cast aside the others. This leaves us with one peculiar question: Why do we equate fancy writing with good writing? As a part of this community, this is a question I have pondered rather often. In my case, there is a folder of abandoned stories lying on my desktop that haunt me each time I open my laptop. These works once had my heart, their characters thriving in the depths of my mind, but I left them in the folder to rot. All because I had drilled the idea of my writing not being “fancy” or “professional” enough to be worth finishing. This mindset is what ultimately discourages writers from ever fulfilling their dreams. If we let this mentality slip between the folds of our safe space, we are contradicting the concept of a supportive and healthy community that we have worked to reach. Alas, not all hope is lost. There are a few ways we can make sure this mindset does not halt our creative flow. The first of which seems the easiest but takes a lot of stamina. Simply limiting distractions from your work space. Whether this means placing your phone in another room or only having your writing tab open, do it. By giving yourself only the choice to write, you are practically forcing your mind to do what it has become afraid of. Another possible solution would be to share your work. This strategy takes more courage than the former because it can be scary to expose such a personal part of yourself to others. Nonetheless, if you have online writer friends, it is almost guaranteed they will be ecstatic to offer their support. It is highly unlikely they will criticize your writing. By seeing how someone else admires your work, you will realize who you’re writing for and why it’s important. Finally, it might be best to take a temporary break. If writing has become too much pressure on you, taking a break is vital. You won't be any less of a writer for not writing 24/7. It is perfectly fine and even necessary to relax your mind and let ideas flow around. Reflecting will help you remember why you started and why you want to continue. We must remind ourselves that our stories are worth sharing with the world. If you love your plot, your world, your characters, then go write. If you have a message to shout, do it the way you do best. Fancy writing can be good, but not all good writing is fancy. Remember that there are people who want to hear your story the way you intended to tell it, and that is the only thing that matters.
- Unraveling the Mystery: The Addictive Nature of Psychological Thrillers
The thrilling escape from reality, the rush of adrenaline, and an invite to the world of psychological thrillers where each step will make you question everything you’ve ever learnt. We humans have always had a morbid fascination with and curiosity about violence and calamity. We are all used to a routine, a set pattern of line and human behaviour, and have an adverse reaction when there is a disturbance in that pattern. What happens when this pattern is disrupted? This is demonstrated in physiological thrillers. The origins of psychological thrillers can be traced back to the early 20th century, with the works of authors such as Edgar Allan Poe, H.P. Lovecraft, and Daphne du Maurier setting the stage for the genre. These writers introduced themes of suspense, mystery, and psychological tension into their stories, paving the way for the psychological thrillers that would follow. In the mid-20th century, filmmakers like Alfred Hitchcock popularised the genre with classic films such as Psycho and Vertigo, which featured intricate plots, morally ambiguous characters, and elements of psychological manipulation. These films captured the imagination of audiences and established the blueprint for modern psychological thrillers. These stories often provoke deep emotional responses and cause thought-provoking discussions about human nature, morality, and the darker aspects of the human psyche. It stimulates a part of the brain that is rarely stimulated by setting off chemicals that make us feel euphoric and leaves an addictive, heady feeling in its wake. This leads to a compulsive need in most of us – a need to examine broken behavioural patterns, and to take an adrenaline ride through the twists and turns of crime fiction, fascinating us all with the genre. It gives us the opportunity to step into the shoes of a detective, delving deep into the psyche of characters, anticipating their every move. We slowly unravel the thoughts, emotions, and hidden depths of human nature, revealing facets rarely seen in our day-to-day lives. It's a journey into the human mind, shedding light on its mysterious and often shadowy corners. Statistics have shown that people’s obsession with the genre scares them; they wonder if there is something wrong with them. However, that is not so. Psychiatrists opine that, far from being criminally inclined, those who read about crime are generally people with a high empathetic factor. Psychiatrists go on to say that their interest in crime fiction is often driven by a strong sense of morality and justice as they navigate themes of right and wrong while reaffirming their own values. Their fascination with crime blossoms from a compassionate curiosity about the human condition than a fascination with criminal acts themselves. However, there are also certain negative aspects to consider when discussing the addictive nature of psychological thrillers. Some critics argue that these stories can glorify violence, promote harmful stereotypes, and desensitise audiences to real-world trauma and suffering. There has been a rise in anxiety levels, sleeplessness, depression levels, listlessness, and withdrawal from surroundings. This constant exposure to suspenseful or terrifying scenarios can heighten one's sense of paranoia and anxiety, especially when the content blurs the line between fiction and reality. It is important to critically analyse the ethical implications of consuming media that exploits fear and manipulation for entertainment purposes. Although reading and watching true crime and thrillers is entertaining, it should be done within limit by respecting the age ratings as some content may be too graphic or heavy on readers, unknowingly affecting their daily life. Another necessity would be to consult an experienced professional when any problem arises. It is important to keep our mental health and well-being our priority. This can be kept within moderation by taking breaks from the books and balancing this content with some positive and lighthearted content. References : Vinita Dawra Nangia, Why are we obsessed with psychological thrillers?, The Times of India, September 15, 2019 https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/blogs/o-zone/why-are-we-obsessed-with-psychological-thrillers/# Accessed April 2024 Girish Dutt Shukla, Psychological Thrillers and why are they so intriguing?, December 5, 2022 https://girishduttshukla.com/blog/psychological-thrillers-and-why-are-they-so-intriguing/ Accessed April 2024 Follow the author Prisha on Instagram @prishaaa_m